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February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. At first it went alittle slow, but you did warn us. But now I am hook and I can;t wait for the other stories you have completed. You have talented and I for one appreciate that you are sharing it. Keep writing because you excel at it.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, loved it. keep it coming. Update Soon!!!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved this chapter...its really getting to the thick of things now...cant wait to read the next chapter
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story you got here. I look forward to seeing it progress. I love Lani. Shes definately got a Welsh attitude, I should know being welsh lol. i love the different charecteristics of each charecter and Eagerly await the next chapter.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You guys are so frickin' awesome. Thanks for your support. I'm sorry it seems so slow, but I want you guys to fall in love with these characters as much as I have. Peace and love!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is fantastic. Please update soon!!!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! its been a long time since a story made me feel like i was actually there... and i just cant wait for u to update to see what happens.. i love the intereaction delaney and jason have.. im i sensing a future relationship between lani and ryan? please update soon!!!!!!!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hola
primero: i really like this story
why i havent reviewed? well normally dont log in but then i saw that you only accept logged in people and i was like uh that is a lot of work. HOWEVER i saw that you only got five reviews and i was like oh no i should review
segundo: pues, i cant find any syntax, grammar, etc problems that are sooo distracting, i must saw, i am WOWed by your skills
now about the story, i feel for delancy, and because i am not patient, i just want to throw a football at lol oh god i forgot his name! ryans's friend...yeah but while i do love the drama and angst i am missing some amor
anyhow
this review is kinda scatter brain, but i hope you can find at least one word that makes you smile and encourages you to continue to write. DONT be like me...lol i used to write but stopped because i am just lazy and i had school
but thanks again and i will review more for you
cole I am
primero: i really like this story
why i havent reviewed? well normally dont log in but then i saw that you only accept logged in people and i was like uh that is a lot of work. HOWEVER i saw that you only got five reviews and i was like oh no i should review
segundo: pues, i cant find any syntax, grammar, etc problems that are sooo distracting, i must saw, i am WOWed by your skills
now about the story, i feel for delancy, and because i am not patient, i just want to throw a football at lol oh god i forgot his name! ryans's friend...yeah but while i do love the drama and angst i am missing some amor
anyhow
this review is kinda scatter brain, but i hope you can find at least one word that makes you smile and encourages you to continue to write. DONT be like me...lol i used to write but stopped because i am just lazy and i had school
but thanks again and i will review more for you
cole I am
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i just wanted to say i like what you have here. As i write about romance too, i can safely say m a sucker for em too. so keep up the good work, and i hope you update soon.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys. Umm, not to be a grouch, but it's a little disheartening not to have any reviews as of yet. I know I just posted this yesterday, but I have a finished story, and I'd really like to post the rest of it up. In order to do that, I would really like to hear your opinion of the story thus far. I know it's a little slow now, but it'll get better, I promise. Thanks!