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for Boys and Girls, Part I

by Jaded1004

schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! WHat a fantastic story!! I can't wait to read the other three parts!!
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story.
person VicRia
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWw....i love this story! Good Job on it!
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww i really like this story..its a good overall story so yea i like it lol
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. i have a thing for connecting stories where we get to learn about the different friends through each one.

Delaney and Jason really grew on me and i found myself getting totally into their relationship ups and downs. I even cried a little... I'm such a sop.

Can't wait to read the next story and for you to post the third. I have to admit that I'm kind of curious about Jacy, because she doesn't seem to have a potential love interest yet. I really hope you do a story about her because her character has so much potential.

Love your writing. Keep up the great work.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it...Cant wait for the next update. please make it soon.
person Blue Eyes
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!! Can't wait to read what happens next.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story. I hope you keep on updating as fast as you can. I can't wait to see what happens next, actually, the whole series. Really good job.
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, ha. Men Eh? Give them twice the brain and they will be twice as stupid. Can't wait to read more...although, your chapters could be a little longer. cause the chapter seems to end even before you actually get into it.

but other than that good job..update soooon
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bastard... he should have at least called her or woke her up with a sweet kiss... maybe even a round two!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Kira-Feles.