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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand. I think I need a lot of background history. But it sounds promising
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make your chapters longer like the first chapter. Short chapters to an awesome story frustrate me.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Enishi's family did not know about Ken. I like the ligthness of the story, but I wish you would add some more important things in. Right now some of the stuff seems to be fillers. What's with the soldiers?
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. I didn't review. I do like the story but I think we need more about the story plot. What does a beta do? I might do it.