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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (holds my breath....)What a cliff-hanger to leave a chapter on! Very, very,very good....I like it! lol
But I must admit, I also loved a few snippets of this chapter too....
'Kiss my ass..' 'Gladly'....Loved the way in which your characters used those terms to each other..
And.......
'Do I have a priviledge to anything in this house that I can use to cover my body with?' 'Me!'
Excellent...excellent...excellent...

Ah, so Daylith is Bi?...(slaps my forehead...) I'm so slow sometimes..lol..
Sooooooooooo did Daylith skip class because he and Katherine made out?...Does Timmy truely have a rival for Dayliths attentions?....Or is Daylith just using her to see Timmys reaction?...
Oh and I knew, I just knew, that his uncle was going to be pissed at him for staying out and not doing his chores!
It was good of Daylith to come looking for him....though, what's going to happen now?...Will Timmy return with Daylith back to his home...or will he continue to live with his abusive uncle?

I just wanted to let you know that i really love your story and have enjoyed reading it. i specifically liked your descriptions of the boys. It leaves just a bit to the imagination and the story line fills in the blanks about their personalities and desires. Please keep up the good work.

He called Timmy a FAG???? Daylith had the nerve to think that of Timmy?...I can't believe it! After all that pushng and teasing, trying to find out how Timmy really felt...for his own 'dirty little secret' to be revealed.....AND HE CALLS TIMMY A FAG???....OOOhhh, don't hold me back...let me punch him...lol....

Sooooooo...Daylith is 'gay'....and he's just offered himself to a committed relationship with Timmy?...Wow, fast mover! lol...Poor Timmy, once again left confused, not only with Dayligh emotions, but his own too....
Wonder how they'll both react in the light of day?...Will Daylith keep his 'date' with Katherine...and will he 'use' her to provoke a reaction from Timmy?...
Yep, all looking good...lol..

I like tim- I want him to become stronger mentally so he can handle his uncle- ie more story. I hope Daylith doesnt turn out to be just a user. or if he does that someone else comes along to help Tim.

So, Dayliths curiosity over Timmys sexuality....Is it because Daylith himself is gay?....
And I thought that Timmy might have refused to stay the night, because he'd already escaped one near beating from his drunken uncle for being home late to do his chores....To stay out all night, again not having done his chores...that's risking a bit too much, isn't it?
It'll be interesting to see where the next chapter goes...
I'm looking forward to reading it!

Aw poor Timmy...Isn't that just his luck! Already the girls are hitting on Daylith...and Daylith seems more than happy with it...What chance does Timmy stand? lol

Dammit Daylith....Now Timmy is gonna think you choose Marcus over him....
Really good chapter...I liked it a lot...And thank-you soooo much for breaking up the story now, and letting people know when the POV changed...Made for a much more enjoyable read..
So, is Daylith going to put things right between them...or...is he going to let what Marcus said to him affect his growing friendship with Timmy?
Ohhhh what to do...what to do?...Become one of the 'popular' crowd....or remain an 'outsider', hanging around with the school loser!!!....Tough decision...

Sooooooo, who was the man that called on his uncle?..A lawyer, to say that everything belonging to his parents was now his?...A child probation officer, worried that such a young boy should be working so hard on his uncles farm?...
Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out..lol