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Daylith just doesn't seem quite the heroic name. I mean the way he stood up to his dad...he's got some kahunas! I am starting to not like his dad much. And is it just me being paranoid or is his uncle dead or seriously hurt? I liked the hugging bed scene it was very...emo. Sorry I couldn't think of a better word. The convention went off ok, but what a drain!

Mitts

I would be delighted if you read it!!! One thing though...Do you know anything about Final Fantasy VII? Because thats what my stories are about...I love it, and write fan fiction about it...The one I would love to use your picture on is titled, Obsession...You'll find it at
www.fanfiction.net
Just click on the search button, and tap in Mitts...You should find my name easily there...Click on my name, and it'll take you to my homepage, (ignore the drabble there, lol) Just scroll to the bottom...and hey presto! Clink on Obsession..and read to your hearts content...lol..Ohhhh, and if you want a laugh, read some of the reviews I have for it! I must have the greatest bunch of reviewers in the world!!! I hope to add your name among them!

Mitts

Oh wow...for a minute there, I really thought Dayliths dad was going to kick Timmy out of the house! Now, he decides to show concern for his son's welfare...I guess it's because Daylith no longer has his mother. So his father thinks it's about time he took an interest...Too little, too late springs to mind...

Ohhhhh..and Daylith and Timmy..still at cross-purposes with one another..Each knowing what they want, but each still not getting it quite right...Ahhhhh, the angst, lol...I love it! So, just what will Timmy get up to, now that Daylith has gone into the shower and has left him all alone in the bedroom? Please say he goes to join him in the shower, lol....But don't say Dayliths dad comes into the room, and talks Timmy into leaving...Ohhhh poor Daylith, think how gutted he'd be to come back...and find Timmy gone..NO note, no explanation....

Ok...sorry...getting a little carried away there, lol....

And ohhhhh....fudge me...double, triple wow.....The picture is fantastic...beautiful...I love it..If you were to say, 'That's it, its done'..I'd still think it was brilliant! I'm not sure what else you're going to add to it, but I can't wait to see! Ohhhhhhh I only wish the site I have my Cloud/Sephiroth story at, allowed pictures..I'd ask your permission to borrow it...I know my readers would love it too....lol. Oh boy, I feel so honoured...Thank you so much...Its perfect!!! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..there's a thought...Would you mind..if I directed my readers to the picture when I post my next chapter?...If you'd rather I didn't, you can email me and tell me not to...Like you, I won't be offended, or upset...

I'm suppose to be traveling to a convention right now but I did a last minute check and saw you updated so I stayed to read and review. I am sooo going to be late, but it was worth it. The fight was awesome I could just see the other students jostling each other for a better view. And Marcus being a low down sneaky cur acted to form. I just hope Latin's uncle doesn't show up or the *bleep's* gonna hit the fan!

I really enjoy this story. Especially because it has an excellent plot and keeps you coming back for more. You keep the suspense up very well. Keep on writing!

Mitts

No, it was definately your name that got me reading the first chapter...but after that the story itself now keeps me coming back for more, lol....
I knew Daylith would break his promise..Jackass Marcus deserved a beating too, threatening to take Timmy by force...I have a feeling though, even after the fight, it's not the last we're going to be seeing of him!
Oh crap..Please tell me that Timmy isn't going back with his uncle? I'm surprised he hasn't been hauled off before now...
Just a couple of things to point out...
When Timmy gets on the bus..and Marcus tells him to sit by him..You have Timmy mention his own name, instead of Dayliths..and also..its 'waist' not 'waste'....
Teeny little things that I'm sure you can put right in no time! lol
Looking forward to the update.....

I'm still reading and happen to like the story alot. I get really excited when I see there has been an update.

Mitts

Yay! An update...Good to see, lol..
Aw, how brave of Timmy was that, to confess all to Daylith? Although, I guess it was the best thing to do..After all, what would have happened if Marcus had called for him while Daylith was there? Yes, I think it would have been far far worse for Daylith to have found out that way....
And oohhhhh...They're boyfriend/boyfriend now... Offical like, sealed with a kiss lol...God help Marcus if he tries anything on with Timmy now...He's taken!
Just one thing I will point out...Second sentence, first paragraph..
'I just lied there in Dayliths bed..' Change the word 'lied' to 'lay'. Lied means to tell fibs...
Gosh, I can't wait for the next chapter now....And I can't believe that Timmy was too tired to cement their relationship....Come on Timmy, think of your readers..lol
Oh, I'm so glad you're still going to do the picture for me...I honestly thought you had forgotten about it, lol....
And the reason I asked about the name you choose...Is because that is my surname. Not the mmm part, lol...but the Mittens part! Coincidence or what?

this is really good. i couldn't stop reading it. PLEASE keep writing! i can't wait for the up date

This a good story os far. Please update real soon.