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Duhn Duhn Duuuuhhhn! Marcus is backkkk! Gosh that was a cool cliffie. Being so alone with Marcus on the scene is definitely setting the scene for somehting juicy happening.I can't believe it's been so long since an update...it felt like FOREVER! LOL! Just kidding I'm just as bad, my attention is easily drawn and life just gets too involved. Hence I'm not a professional writer. You did a great job on this ch. I thought there was going to be something creepy at the abandoned farm like it was where Day's dad lived with his parents before they died in a terrible fire hence the knowledge about the area and the eerie feeling. Oh well my imagination was going haywire.

Mitts

This is my email address, if you'd like to get in touch with me that way....
penwrite@hotmail.co.uk

Good story so far. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see want happen next and how this story end. I like to see how serious their relationship is. How their school treat them now. If Tim will beable to stay or if he has to move in back with his uncle. What macrous will do now?

Mitts

Hey there....whats happening to your story? Please don't say you've lost heart...I know how hard it can be though, when it feels like no one is interested...but I am, lol...Have you tried moving it to another web site for more exposure? Fiction Press is another one I read from now and again....Well, I hope to hear thats it writers block, and not a story being abandoned....

Thank you so much for reviewing again, lol....I'm glad you liked it enough to read the latest chapter! I'm getting a little peeved with FanFiction though, its not sending out any alerts to people, and I can't reply to anyone who has reviewed either, unless I have their email address...Thank goodness I can contact you this way to express my thanks!
Hows the picture coming? Will it be ready by the time my next chapter is to be posted? (Don't worry, its not even written up properly yet!) I really hope so. When I told my friend, Stephy, that someone had a picture I could show, she got over excited and did one for me quickly that I put up, lol...Bless her.
Anyway, talking of updates.....come on...when are you going to update? lol...

Mitts

Oh my goodness...I read you review...Thank you sooo much. You liked it, lol. Now you can see why I'm so excited about showing your picture off with it, can't you? I just know the readers are going to love it! Thank you so much for taking the time and trouble to read it for me....
Mitts

Mitts

Ohhhh my.....that was fudging brilliant!!!! Well worth the long wait lol...Yeah, go Daylith..go Timmy..
Oh boy, I sure hope Dayliths dad didn't hear them...their romance has had enough go wrong so far, without any more being added to it!
You write a very good sex scene you know..I'm very impressed lol..

Oh wow...you're reading my story, and loving it! I am so happy lol....Well, after reading your sexy chapter,(whoa...fanning myself down!) I'm wondering what you will make of my chapter 13 lol..I eagerly await your review!!

That was really hawt, thank you! Also I thought that last line was pretty naive of Daylith. I mean they are both minors so really what the adults in their lives say does matter and could potentially keep them apart.

Oooooh NIFTY idea having a comment page!!!
Only down side I can see.. is people might think you updated when you haven't and get disappointed :P