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November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG I hope you update soon. I love your story a lot.
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story:) Update soon!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally the maecus timmy showdown! I'm surprised he was willing to share.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.....YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol.
Do you know how many times I've clicked on your story, in the hope of seeing an update?
Thank you, thank you, thank you for picking it up again.
And oh, what a fantastic way to start, lol
Do you know how many times I've clicked on your story, in the hope of seeing an update?
Thank you, thank you, thank you for picking it up again.
And oh, what a fantastic way to start, lol
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooo Timmy, you fool. Don't trust Marcus! He'll hurt you, and betray you. He'll tell what you did straight away to Daylith in the hope of breaking you two up.
No way is Marcus going to be satisfied with one single night of passion, not if he gets as hard as he says he does every time he see's Timmy. And once he gets a taste of Timmy in a passive, willing mood, hes going to want more and more of it. He's going to become addicted. And what's Timmy going to do then?
I knew Marcus was up to no good, as soon as he said, 'Baby'. I just can't believe Timmy fell for it. Why oh why didn't he just stay quiet? Why didn't he simply refuse to go out, and just talk through the closed and locked safety of the door?
It's so good to see you back! Look, two new chapters and you've got me all riled up again, and involved with your characters lol.
I really hope the next chapter won't be as long but....I'd be prepared to wait, lol....
No way is Marcus going to be satisfied with one single night of passion, not if he gets as hard as he says he does every time he see's Timmy. And once he gets a taste of Timmy in a passive, willing mood, hes going to want more and more of it. He's going to become addicted. And what's Timmy going to do then?
I knew Marcus was up to no good, as soon as he said, 'Baby'. I just can't believe Timmy fell for it. Why oh why didn't he just stay quiet? Why didn't he simply refuse to go out, and just talk through the closed and locked safety of the door?
It's so good to see you back! Look, two new chapters and you've got me all riled up again, and involved with your characters lol.
I really hope the next chapter won't be as long but....I'd be prepared to wait, lol....
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you won't abandon this story. It's really good. I surely enjoyed it. It comes with many twists and turns and I like that the characters are complex.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I just knew Marcus would put in appearence (Ok, I was HOPING Marcus would put in an appearence, lol) What is that boy up to now? Seems he's got a friend on his side, a bit of back up. More trouble ahead for Timmy and Daylith?
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh you big meanie!!! You DID trick me...and there was me, thinking yessssss, more of Daylith and Timmy and Marcus lol
So, does that mean, you won't be updating any more new chapters until you've finished re-editing your work? Pout....
So, does that mean, you won't be updating any more new chapters until you've finished re-editing your work? Pout....
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh noooo...I only just quickly clicked on your story to see if you'd updated yet..and you have...and I have to rush out! Ok, don't go anywhere...I WILL RETURN, lol....
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay...You're back.....And boo....So is Marcus! Surely he isn't going to start anything? Surely he knows when to quit? He's not that stupid, is he?
Great chapter, as always. I really thought there was going to be a confrontation between Timmy and Dayliths dad but, so far it seems as if Timmy can stay.
I liked how you had them go for a walk in the late afternoon, early evening. I thought you described that beautifully. Little disappointed they didn't 'play' lol..but its all good.
One question though....
How did Dayliths dad know about the abandoned basketball court? Has the demolished home got anything to do with him? Is there a little mystery going on there? Or is it just part of this filler chapter, and nothing important?
(Big smiles) I am so pleased you're picked up this story again....Welcome back!
Great chapter, as always. I really thought there was going to be a confrontation between Timmy and Dayliths dad but, so far it seems as if Timmy can stay.
I liked how you had them go for a walk in the late afternoon, early evening. I thought you described that beautifully. Little disappointed they didn't 'play' lol..but its all good.
One question though....
How did Dayliths dad know about the abandoned basketball court? Has the demolished home got anything to do with him? Is there a little mystery going on there? Or is it just part of this filler chapter, and nothing important?
(Big smiles) I am so pleased you're picked up this story again....Welcome back!