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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Although I would recommend a beta. It is a little hard to read at times and gets confusing. A beta would greatly enhance this story. Please consider it.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you have drawn your characters. Tsuki & Irihi are easily seen and do I want to see more, now- please?
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Contine please. write write write