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by DarkMoonInShadow

person Saminada
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Now that's what I call HOT!!! LOL XD =)
Thanks alot for the hot update!! I loooooooooved it!!
I wonder what Malakai has planed for them now?? Will he succeed to take Tsuikyo?? hummm I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

Thanks again for the great update!! *hugs* :P
person Tamura
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well at least irihi has proof now to be suspicious of malakai. conceited bastard probably thinks to kill irihi and take tsukiyo as well
person Saminada
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!! Awesome story!!
I totally love it! Hihi ^^

Malakai and Ruby are such assholes!! grr Playing with ppls mind like that! ><
But I must say that there's something sexy about Malakai tho! >> ...I always had a thing for bad guys like him! LOL
I just wonder if my 'fascination' or whatever will turn into Hate! *shrugs* I'll have to wait and see to answer that! n___n

I hope u'll update again soon! I really can't wait for more! *huggles*
person Tamura
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can i just say that i find ruby really really obnoxious and vapid. i also find malakai deliciously evil but i still hope he gets his butt whooped.
person Tamura
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor stupid ruby. i'm pretty sure malakai has no intention of allowing irihi to be in control of their kind for two reasons. first, he's kind of in love (at least in some way) with tsukiyou and second, he's more powerful so he probably thinks he could do a better job. not to mention the fact that he wants tsuki for himself so he would want irihi out of the way.
person dragonfire04
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like this story. I wonder what will happen next.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please moree
person nyge98
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I want to see were it will go next. I hope you can continue it sometime
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story it's amazing. If you're looking for a beta, I'd be willing to help out. My e-mail's Way_2_the_Dawn@yahoo.com I look forward to the next chapter.
person aisha
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just keep those chapters coming and we'll all be happy! *wink*