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for Mimi’s Mirror

by Bishonen

person Bad Bunny Mommy
schedule August 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This one was alright.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude that was awesome!
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review. Yeah....it was my first, lol. And 1/3 or 1/4 of my first erotic ones ever. I'm hoping I can improve. I technically edited it a little before posting. (btw, they need to get a reply to reviews thing on here -.o)
person rich j.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great!! Story is a start to more stories along this line???
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story. any other mirror's coming to life in another story soon?
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was awesome! You should think about writing more to this story since it ended a bit quickly. Very nice story/lemon.
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should do another chaptered
person Iyasu
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome.
person Angel
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so bloody hot! I LOVED IT!
person Lady_Arna
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cool, I like the idea that Mimi's such a narcissist that she only wants herself.

Though as a concrit point, I think you could have used different wording in some sections of your fic.

But otherwise, awesome. :)