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for Midnight Mass

by phreneticice

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schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mr Pan, I sometimes wonder if you're just trying to find out how far you can push your luck before someone stops you.
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A Very, very hot and naughty story! I have read several of your stories and like them very much. The only teensy thing that could be improved is lengthening the actual intercourse scene and drawing it out like you did to the undressing/suckling part. Other than that, a truly excellent story!!!