rate_review Reviews

yay! it's you! i'm so happy you are posting here. that you do post here. i've read all your stuff from boyskissing_fics. it killed me that that comm died. it was a really good one. did your collab fics with dcj die along with it? i hope not. i think that iki and alerio are two of the best characters ever. along with pan and will of course. there was that other one two with a sammy and a devon. something degrees? i wanted to read more of that. anyway, just wanted to say hi and that i think you're a really good writer. i'm totally jealous. ;) and thankful there are some writers whose stuff is worth reading out there. i'll review ya later!

I personally think the pace is perfect. Good stuff

Awww, it's alright, the pace at which you're writing is just fine :).

When a chapter is ended like that, without any real closure, sort of cliffhanger-ish but not really, a million different situations would go through my mind on what would happen. I'm usually never at all close to the truth, but i never want to be, really. So thanks for building up this anticipation in me ;).

Can't wait for an update.

You just called your characters friuty bastards. That's normal. While anyhow. Good story.

Oh gosh, that was deeply unnerving. It almost makes me want to cry, really. But it's so adorably sweet that i just can't help but love these kind of heartaches =). I love the gorgeous purity there is between these two. I know you warned about the angst, and i like your angst-yness =DDD.

Continue, pleeeeeaaaase!

I really like this story, which is kind of a surprise since I have no idea what it's about. However, the characterization is well done and the language utilized in certain sections is almost poetic, if a BIT emo-ish (well, no ones perfect). I do hope tho that you make Pan either stand up for himself or get his ass kicked trying, he seems like a bit of a wimp. Will is cute, by the way, and I do hope you set them up soon, they seem like they need one another.

omg, i love this. ive always been a fan of stories with the whole "friends become more" plot. this story is really cute and i feel really sorry for pan. a whole week with no will *shakes head*

i cant wait for another update!!
im gunna bookmark this story too so i can check back :3

i love this fic. poor pan, being picked on cause he's different. will so wants him too though. update soon.

it really sucks being an outsider. you capture pan's emotions so well... everything's just so believable