rate_review Reviews

Brilliant. I'm curious as to wheather Roy and Blair actually FOUND Pan's journal or not. Nothing they said specifically referenced his diary. I would think that true bullies would photo copy it and paste it across campus. It seems like they're just guessing to me. Love the story. Only problems: in one of the chapters you switch to the name Blair while Roy is actually the one speaking (Blair's not even in that scene). And in another chapter you use the phrase "most favorite", which is really just a pet peeve of mine (since it's both redundant and grammatically incorrect). Sorry I can't be more specific, I read this about 3 hours ago but had to leave before I could write a proper review (but I HAD to review the story since I enjoyed it so damn much). Great writting. Update soon!

My GOD. This is the best thing I've read in AGES! Such progressive vocabulary, such alluring plot twists! Finally something to look forward to! Keep up the good work! =wants more of the rape= 8D

Uah, this is sooo good. Love your writing!!!!

I swearswear my heart leaped when i saw that this was updated. I couldn't find it for a few months, and thought you took it off aff, and almost got depressed. Almost.

Anyway, [prepare for some major ass-kissing], honestly one of the best fics out there, and i really don't like writing reviews. Seriously curious as to why it hasn't been bombarded with 100++ reviews already. People usually fall for those best-friends-to-lovers thing. And it's not just the storyline, but the way you've written it as well. And yeaaayy fiiinally insight of Will's perspective on their little intimacy!

Kay done. And, for regularity's sake, 'update!'

I just love this story. I love Will and Pan. The way you characterize them is well done. The plot thickens for the two and I can't help but wonder what will happen next. I hope you have not abandoned this story and that you update again soon.

Wishing you luck and hoping to read more soon,

~rAiNwAtEr~

justice02908@yahoo.com

I remember reading this a while ago and loving it. I still love it and I don't know if you edited anything but it sounds more polished than I remember. I love the dynamics between Will and Pan. They aren't the sweet lovey dovey couple but they are real and what they have seems very real for them.

I'm being lazy today, so I'll be brief. A very interesting story, well written and thought out plot, vivid characters. Keep it up!

This fic is awesome so far!! I can't wait for you to continue it and update so I can find out what happens later!! And I've read some stories by lime green and tangerine, which I must say, I loved. So, please! Polease, update soon!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

awww, thats so sad. poor pan. i feel so sorry for him. he has so much shit going on at the moment and i dont think any of it will turn out good. at least will knows hes gay now [even though i thought he had alway known 0.o shows my comprehensive skills XD]

wonder what will happen with the journal, but im guessing that whatever it is, it wont be good.

cant wait for the next update!!

:3

eee! you updated! it makes me happy. i really like this story. will is making me mad though :( stupid play boy. i just know hes gunna hurt pan when he keeps doing that stuff. and it makes me mad that pan will probably wait for him, even if will doesnt deserve it.

grrrrr. pan should get a boyfriend that way will can see what he missed out on.

but his journal! where is it? that cant be good.

i love this :D
keep updating. cant wait to see what happens!