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by tarredglittered

person l.fire
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a cruel cliffie.
you horrible person.
making me wait so long for thi schapter and then to loeave me like this....
person gosia
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you tahnk you thank you so much. This chapter was great. I like that Pan is tall, it somehow fits the story, I can`t explain why I think that. And Toby is so cute ^^
person Kavitta
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cn realise y ur upset wit chapter 10 bt hey, u knw wat it's Good.

& Im here dyin 2 find out wat's been goin on wit Pan

so -beggin puppy dog eyes w/ pout- plzzzz update...I absolutely love ur story!

It is so True Life! lol...I really appreciate ur wrk-hands u a gift card 2 a top class SPA [u like goin 2 a spa, roite?]-

-kisses-
person CiraArana
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Read all chapters in one go. So, a present? What about the next chapter? Like, tomorrow. Or something.

I know that this probably won't make you change your mind or feel less unhappy with the last chapter, but I thought it was good. Correction: I think the whole story's good. Seriously. Brilliant even. Brilliant and painful. Never took myself for a masochist, but apparently I am because I want more. And I don't think the future is going to be happy for these two boys. So I'm going to hang around and suffer horribly. Because this story is one of those that grab me and won't let go of me; I'll be thinking about it for days, probably re-reading it at least once (and waiting for an update, dreading the things to come).

Not to forget, all but dying of curiosity about what happened with Pan during these years and what will happen when they meet again and ... so on.

Last but not least: one of the most important thing for me in fiction is the characters. Good characters can make the most ridiculous plot interesting. Pan and Will are two of the most vivid and most present characters I've come across in (slash) fiction. To the point that they intruded into another fic and I really had to remind myself that these now where different people.

Like I said: brilliant.

CA
person gosia
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
person Taylor E.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is a really sad story..I don't know how many times I've cried. Especially when Will went away. The ironic thing is I know exactly how Pan(and will) feels. You definitely have to keep up with this story. I love it!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A rec led me here... I hope you continue since it's ending on a sad note
person Black Sharne
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, really, and I hope you didn't give up on it because it would be a shame! The characters are so lovely! Is there any chance for you to continue this story?

Hope so ^^

Bye (and the chapter was great, to my opinion, but maybe you had wish to express more things than it did?)

Black Sharne
(and sorry for the possibly bad english, this is not my mothertongue and I need to improve my abilities to speak the language)
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg please update soon its killing me
person a
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am stunned. you are one of the rare authors who actually manages to make me budge emotionally. I am generally a stone cold git but you dragged my heart around! I really am looking forward to an update and hoping you haven't abandoned this because god knows I love your boys and would love to see them reach a fluffy closure