rate_review Reviews

Like pretty much everyone following this story, I imagine, I really like the idea of Pan and Will together. I was originally disheartened when their meeting again went so badly and didn't read past the playground part. But then I came back later and read all of it, and all I can say is, trust yourself to take the story and its characters in whatever direction feels right, and trust that your readers will appreciate your work, even if it goes places that surprise or shock them.

I love these characters you've created. They're so complex, interesting and likable. New direction? New characters that will likely turn out to be just as complex and interesting, or at least contribute to the complexity of already existing characters? Awesome. Please keep writing!

Ohhhhh myyyy godddd...PLEASE keep going with this story. The second I started reading this, I didn't stop...well, until I got to the latest chapter, but, eh, that's a given. lol. No seriously, I'm begging you to continue. I sense something might be going on with that new kid, the blonde, and Pan, and I'm positively DYING to see a confrontation between Pan and Will! This story is amazing. Please don't abandon it. ^_^

kay i wrote out this pretty heartfelt review but then it got erased, so all i'm saying is, amaziiingggggg. i think i get what you say about the story being a bit different, like how in Part 1 everything was more dark, painful, and all in the past. and now it's just back to reality. if that was your intention, then seriously, whoaa, beautifully carried out, with crazy conviction. if not, well then, whoops ;).

aaawwwwww i love the lil showdown. arghhh Pan is still blatantly angry, i love! and ooohhh, new guy, brought in to ensure some jealousy, i hopeeeeee =D

i pretty much typed everything out again. i'm pretty much nothing short of in love with this, it's kinda depressing hahaha.

Well, I still like it.
=P

different? different how=?
but i kike pan and will-together.
very very munch much.
this chap. was fine though.

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

oh. my. god. you could've screwed this chapter up and i still would've been ecstatic that you've updated.

the fact that you didn't? added bonus, multiplied infinity.

I was so excited that you updated this that I didn't even let myself read it until I'd finished my readings for class. Probably the best motivation ever. Still love it. Still can't wait to see what happens next. Intrigue!

OMG !

You've finally updated!!! Please don't leave me hanging like that ever again!

I will now be eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)

I will not lynch you, on the contrary, I am celebrating your muse! I thought the story was dead. It would have been a shame.
So, great you're back and let's hope you stay around longer this time =)