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Why have you still not finished this? Please please put up another chapter.

Hi! I like this story of yours; it's so bittersweet, like a reminder of who you were and who'll become, but almost forgetting that the more important thing is the present. Anymway, the purpose of this review was to asking you about the previous version of this story. I can't find neither you or the story on FictionPress! Can you please help me? Pretty please? And good luck with your stories! Great job! PS: I apologise for any mistake.. I'm italian, after all! ^^ So, tecnically I have the excuse..

gahhh i'm addicted! I love best friend love stories, lol! Though it doesn't seem to be going well for Will and Pan. I'm not sure how I feel about Dusty yet, I defiantly like him but he seems too nice and perfect that there has to be something bad about him coming, right? hahaha. Anyway, I need an update! I'll go crazy if this story doesn't continue, hehe!

Wow, I just finished all 14 chapters. I'm really sad. First, b/c I finished the last chapter and second b/c I just feel so sad for Pan and Will. I don't understand why Pan would think Will purposely "shattered everything about him". They totally misunderstand each other. When will Will come back and explain everything? Altho I am really liking Dusty. "Can we keep him?", that was priceless! I can't wait for your next update; please don't make it so long inbetween updates. I noticed you started this story 2 years ago! Pls., pls., pls????????

I just started reading this story today. I'm on the first chapter of book 2. I wasnted to r & r after the end of book 1, but I was crying too hard I couldn't type. I am just so sad that Will had to leave. I'm even MORE upset that he hasn't seen or called Pan in 2 1/2 years. He's even been back to town and NOT EVEN VISITED PAN. I don't understand that. He did so much for Pan at school, sticking up for him, not even caring that those assholes commented on his relationship w/Pan. Nothing mattered to him except seeing his friend happy. I just don't understand how he could never call him. And Pan, why couldn't Pan go to Will's dad and get Mike's number? That would have been too easy. Anyway, this is an upsetting but wonderfully written story and I hope it gets happier!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I NEEEEEED MOOOOORE!!!!

A new dustylicious chapter? I am not worthy. Obviously, I love Dusty a little bit. I'm wondering what's up with him in this story. Like, he's assumed to be straight, but he's taking on a pretty big role in a slash fic, which makes me believe that he's gonna get smexy with another boy at some point. But then Will's skanky ass is still hanging around, so I'm not sure what's up with him. I'm also pretty sure that I expressed all of this in a previous review, so I suppose the moral of this review is that I am still completly clueless as to what is going to happen. And I'm still mad for Dusty.

aawwwwww. i love it that Pan still hates Will ahahaha. Learn to earn your keep!

and that is, by far, the best way ever to get someone to talk to you. i'm so intrigued by Dusty.

this has made my day.

I thought that I had reviewed the new chapter, but then I felt like looking over everyone else's reviews and I couldn't find mine, so I'd thought I'd review again, which meant I had to re-read the chapter to make sure that I remembered everything from the first time I read it, and because its fun to read anyway. So, I love Dusty. I really want to see him and Pan together, but then why would you keep Will hanging around if Pan and Dusty were gonna be together? So, I'm thinking that there will be more action between Will and Pan. Not sure. But, that scene during study hall with Dusty picking on Pan about calling him beautiful. That was hilarious. It shows a bit of Dusty's fiesty side, with his quick sense of humor. And the whole car mirror incident is fun, can't wait to see that interaction.

Well. This is my first review for AFF, mainly I'm hoping to throw in a good word for this story, since (through careful stalking) I know you've updated the lime green & tangerine account recently.

Anyway, I like slash, but I like good writing more, and this is both, which is fantastic. I can't wait to read more of it! (... and that would be my way of dropping a subtle hint.)

And I've already spent too long trying to decide how to end these two (profound, meaningful, deep) sentences, so I'll just end with a heartfelt thank you for this story.