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oh don't mind this very late review, I'm just back-tracking and trying to read everything. I liked your story so a review is in order! Yay for revenge! Yay for Age and Kai! Thank you for ending their misery! I'm glad Delacroix got that ending, gosh I hated him haha.

I'm catching up on stories that I've read and enjoyed, somehow, only now I read this chapter, my interest to read seemed to vanish when my muse to writing got somewhat silent as well. But I'm back now *grins*

This final chapter was very powerful, sad and well written, I think it put it all together perfectly. Somehow I can't see another ending to this story, the athmospere seemed so sad all that time that, I couldn't really see the possibility of them having a happy life in the end.

Anyway, great job and I did enjoy your writing style very much, all the more reason to be true to my promise and really check upon your other stories as well.

-C-

God you have a dark mind, but a beautiful way of expressing it. and instead of hating it i love the story. its better then many i have read. now lest go read your other one.

Ahh, what a tragic ending! But in a way, if it ended anyway different, it wouldn't seem as realistic. Awesome job with the story! Hope to see more from you.

oh, wow... you... killed everyone. Nice! :D *evil grin* very good narration of events. You have just a few slight grammar mistakes, and I was wondering if you meant Leprous instead of Leopard :P ---- like in ---> "I was born a leopard" = I was born Leprous" ??? anyway... yep, you killed them. I thought the stry would go on longer, but even if it did not it was good.

Laaerie

Ahh, poor Age!! I don't think Delacroix knew how much damage he did :3 Ahh, give Age Kai to make him feel better! That kid is adorable.

Now I read this, the two chapters you have and I can't wait for the chapter 3! I like your style of writing, and I find these characters and settings here quite interesting. I wonder what will come next and I hope I won't have to wait too long. ^_^ I will check out your other stories too when I get the chance to do so.

Despite a few minor things (aka writing 'reliability' where I think you meant 'liability'), this is very well written. The rape scene between Delacroix and Age was exceptionally powerful. Very good job.

Your Delacroix makes me think of Victor Delacroix from Chaos Legion.

Wow... ummm, I'll be excited to see where you go with this. If you go anywhere else, which I sincerely hope you do.

interesting start - would love to see more.