Reviews for I Broke Down - Originals

person teeta

schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM

ero ... I'll say it only once ...

I loved this chap even BEFORE the change. I guess I didn't say that, I'm sorry.

Greed is terrible, isn't it?

And the chap is STILL great.

Once again, I'm sorry for not saying this clearly at the beginning. I think not sleeping longer than 4 hours a day is taking its toll on me finally.

Anyway, wanting another chap. Keep up great writing!

person ~~*N*~~

schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Huzzah!!! I am sooooo happy that you updated! Yay! Ahem. And, I am exceedingly impressed with the way you constructed this chapter -- I seriously never ever ever expected THAT! But, mwah-hah-hah(!), I was very happy that the only thing that got Joe off was thinking about cuddly little Mark. Very cool, and so appropriate. I was also pleased with the random-ish vignette about Chris dumping the cheerleader...jocks rarely get their act together and go with a cool chick (I think it has something to do with them getting hit in the head a lot), so it was quite cool to read about that unlikely scenario. (Yay!) I'm also pleased with Mark, as always. He's so cute...I love that he likes cartoon films...and popcorn. And his dream was quite interesting, to say the least. I'm excited, as per always, to see what new horrors you will come up with for Mark. I am quite evil, so--proverbially speaking--do your worst, and I'll be along for the ride!

person Saminada

schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

OMG!!! You're so mean!!! How could you stop there???
I read everything in one shot! and for many chapters, I felt like kicking Joe's ass for assuming that Mark was a twelve years old kid!!! >_____<
I think that he's sooooo gonna kill himself when Mark tells him that he's sixteen!!! >_>
Man! I hope you update again soon! I really can't wait to know how Joe's gonna react when he realize how wrong he was about Mark and everything!!!
And btw, thanks for such a nice story!!! It's awesome!! ^^

person ~~*N*~~

schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Okay, so here's another review, just cause it's fun...and I was sooooo overjoyed by the kissyness that I completely forgot to address Mark's return to cutting. Totally unacceptable of me, but apparently once cute boys start kissing, my brain just shuts down and nothing gets in or out. (And, really, that's not such a bad way to live, if you think about it.) Anyhoo, even though I am sad that little Marky-pooh cut himself again, it was definitely in-character...especially because cutting is an addiction like any other and Mark was really hurting due to the fact that Joe's a confused tease (whether he wants to be or not). Although I hope the knife he used was clean -- I'd hate to see Mark get tetanus or hepatitis or something when he has so much future sex to look forward to! Okay, so that's about it. For now. Until my slash-addled brain remembers something else that I wish to commend you on. Au revoir!

person ~~*N*~~

schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I am attempting to wait patiently for Chapter 14, but I just wanted to add another reminder that I love this story. And I'm very interested to see what you've decided to do with the party scenario and how you will craft it so that adorable little Mark returns home for the imminent arrival of his evil patriarch. And how will Joe deal with it? Eeeeee! I'm thrilled to see what you'll conjure for your magical characters.

person Laaerie