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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay! keep this up! I gotta know wot happens and hu found them!!!!!!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I luv ur story!! I am addicted to it. Its funny at times too, i like it. Keep up the good work! <3
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. . . this whole 'kissing girls' thing definitely needs to stop!!!! Hee hee. I cannot WAIT for more!!!!!! Please update soon before I lose my mind!!!!!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read your story in one breath: it is very captivating!
I like the way the relationship between Joe an Mark evolves :)
i'll be waiting for the next updates so please do continue :)
I like the way the relationship between Joe an Mark evolves :)
i'll be waiting for the next updates so please do continue :)
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course Im gonna review, love this story to much. Especially with this new chapter. I wonder who's at the door? Guess I'll have to wait o find out. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! why didn't mark tell his real age? and here i thought that they were finally going to get together. STOP TORTURING ME!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There was quite a problem with the tense of the story - you skip from present to past (sometimes in the same sentence) and there were some word problems too. I don't want to call them spelling mistakes, but they didn't fit write in the sentence or you repeated them. Other than the technical problems I liked the story
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah new chapter! Umm...how deep were those cuts? 'cause that dream seemed really forboding and I'm kinda worried that poor Marky is gonna bleed to death (or at least enough to place him in hospital)T_T !!!HIS POOR ANOREXIC BODY JUST CAN'T TAKE THAT KINDA TRAUMA - NO FOOD = NO ENERGY!!!.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... and in walks Mark.
ero, an incest dream? Got inspired? On my so called lacking revenge? Lol!
Ok, the chap was ok. The girls you described were stupid idiots and so was Joe. Oh, btw, Mark finally called him Joe, instead of Dude. That's a major development here. Oh, so you decide to make Chris decent? Well, would be nice ...
And ... you said something about doing a series of short stories based off of the dreams Mark has. The story with incest dream should be the first there, please.
Hugs,
-E-
ero, an incest dream? Got inspired? On my so called lacking revenge? Lol!
Ok, the chap was ok. The girls you described were stupid idiots and so was Joe. Oh, btw, Mark finally called him Joe, instead of Dude. That's a major development here. Oh, so you decide to make Chris decent? Well, would be nice ...
And ... you said something about doing a series of short stories based off of the dreams Mark has. The story with incest dream should be the first there, please.
Hugs,
-E-
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay I review, at first I thought I'd be lazy ;) lol. Um, Mark keeps having weird but yet strangely interesting dreams. Um, they should have been at the same place; Joe is sooo,hm, clueless?
And now someone caught him with that flat chested girly, wonder who's that going to be....
And now someone caught him with that flat chested girly, wonder who's that going to be....