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Yayness and update! I was getting depressed cause nobody was updating, but when I checked this morning you and Teeta both had. Happy heartattack! Anyways, sorry to here about the pneumonia. Hope you feel better now.

Great chapter. The chaos I expected wasn't so bad - mind you I wouldn't want to be in Joe's possition. That still has the potential to turn out bad.

The grammar is much better in this chapter, just a few small spelling mistakes. Also, be careful not to repeat words too often. For example here: I ran a BATH. I rarely indulged in them but I could feel the stickiness of the blood on my legs and I knew I would have to soak them to get it off. I took the knife with me to the BATH. I stripped and got into the BATH. You use "bath" too often, try replacing it like this: I ran a bath. I rarely indulged in them, but I could feel the stickiness of the blood on my legs and I knew I would have to soak them to get it off. Taking the knife with me, I stripped and got into the tub. Great job though. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.

I hope you're feeling better now! Being in hospital - that sucks. The chapter was great and I didn't mind the wait at all. Poor Mark doesn't think Joe likes him now and he's back to cutting. I hope Joe notices that soon and stops him! Those two need to get together fast. And Mark is sooo cute - thinking he's a male slut now because he kissed two people! LOL :D That would only be the case if he slept with them!

darling this better have a happy ending, i'm only 2 chp.'s in and it scares me

with love her majesty, imeperial 13

Omg! I love ur story and I like this chapter. hope ur exams go well ^^.

Sorry to hear about you being in the hospital, that's the worst! I hope you are feeling better now.
Thanks for the up date, I'd been keeping an eye on this story to see when a new chapter would be up...
Awe poor Mark, that whore keeping him trapped on the couch, no wonder he wanted to take a bath. I hope that Joe didn't get the wrong idea and think that Mark wanted that girl. I'm rooting for you Mark!! See you can't make Mark straight now--I reviewed!!

Dude, you ask fro to many reviews, seriously

Sorry it took so long to review - school sucks! Anyway, there's this huge sense of forboding and I can't wait till the next chapter to find out what's going on - luckily I only have to wait till tomorrow ;)

I find it so ironic that you will give us cookies.......cookie hater!