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Well then! *puts hands on hips* I don't see you updating missy!!! You know, *takes one hand off hip to point directly at YOU* while you were reading my story, YOU COULD HAVE BEEN UPDATING YOURS! *covers eyes with hands and drags them down face* ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!?!?!?!? UPDATE!

i love your sense of humor in this story because mark and i share the same type of sarcasm- a mixture of self-deprecating, outrageous and bitter. you had some lines that were so hilariously funny- the whole paragraph with his paranoid rant about the guy being killed and his tombstone engraved as "dude" was just priceless. i'd name all the other bits and one liners i admired but then i'd practically be quoting the whole story! so BRAVO, please continue! :)

I love your story so far! Hahha, twelve year old duggie huh? So cute!

So, you get review no 1? Or 3? Anyway ... Great chappie! I see better now why the poor guy is so unhappy and I'm not surprised in the least. I would be the same, considering the conditions he grew up in. Like not being fed or talked to ... I liked the switch in the POV. This Joe doesn't seem so bad. He has asthma? His mistaking Mark (sorry if I got the name wrong) for a junkie made me laugh. And his comments that a scrawny, 12-year-old junkie makes him horny - BUHAHAHAHA! Sorry, I couldn't stop myself from writing it, but it was hilarious. And him imagining his uncle in a thong was priceless. On the whole - WOW! Loved the chapter and can't wait to see the next one. Well done, well done!

Oh, two more things, I tend to be forgetful at times. Thanks for the cookie (hazelnut are my favorites!) and you said you need a beta. I wasn't going to say this because I already beta two stories but, oh, hell, why not? If nobody offered to beta your story, I volunteer! If you're interested, mail me.
Ok, so that's basically the fourth review, right? I know it shouldn't count but still. So PEOPLE if you read this, we need one more review to get another chapter, so move your three lazy letters and leave one more review!

Oh, I love your story so much! The more I read the more I become addicted! Great chapter, update soon please!!!

I was lurking around and I found this story. It really is interesting. Mark, the goth kid seems to have everything one would desire and yet he's so unhappy with his life.I like his ranting, it's quite funny even though you probably didn't intend it. And I like your style:"). I hope to see another chapter soon!

I enjoyed reading your story. I found it very interesting, though I did feel it kinda lacked something. Maybe more details about the characters (character background). And the story's flow seemed a bit off. I do like your story concept. I loved that it was not just another one of those poor goth boy and the rich jock storylines. :) I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter, hope to read it soon! :)

Poor guy or girl! Great chapter, update soon please!!!

Gret story line! I love it already. I cant wait for the next chapter! Great chapter, update soon please!!!