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I remember this story from when you first posted it. I really liked it then and look forward to rereading it. Can't wait to see what changes you made! Twice as long story - Hell Yeah!

Come on honey, I've waited too long, I can't take it any longer.....

i honestly can say im very much roped into this story and i cant wait till the next chapter its well written and i feel every feeling the characters are feeling so keep up the good work

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Sure do wish you'd write faster sugar butt, for I can't wait for your lovely main dudes to reveal that they like each other... and sorry but that cutting stuff just weirds me out...such a waste of sweet soft flesh when there are so many other ways to make use of it. LOL Really do think all girls are such predatory monsters? G

UP DATE NOW
NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ewwww, me no like ice cream. Loved the chappy though, really glad you updated. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!

Oh, glorious Chapter 15!!!!!! I'm very sorry for taking so long to read and review...I was out of town for several days and just discovered the bounty of this chapter tonight. It's a great addition! I'm very proud of you for not making Mark the intruder on Joe's BJ...it's neat to see Joe mad at Mark instead of the other way around. It shows that Joe is human and not just the unflappable-yet-horny nice blonde guy. So, yay! Also, I have to applaud the description of Joe's better-than-average endowment which was slipped into the story in a very creative way...it's always nice to share that kind of information with devoted readers. I was soooo happy with Mark's descriptions of things and his disgust while he was being molested by the evil sucker-faced chick. And I was very proud that he wanted to vomit. Poor, cute little Mark -- too tiny and astonished to beat up a teenage nymphomaniac, even if his tonsils depended upon it. So...what else? Oh! I completely salute your evil-ness, in making Joe realize that he's basically in boy love with Mark just as Joe walks in on something that makes him insanely angry. That's just the kind of torture that real life tends to drop like a grand piano upon the heads of everyone who deserves better. So well done! You rock!

I forgot something... I hope you're feeling all better now. Poor ero. Just in case, I'm sending you good vibes of yummy soup and candy (not necessarily to be ingested together). About the story: I really liked Mark's dream sequence from chapter 15...very cool...and I liked the fact that the good ending of the dream freaked Mark out. He is soooo my type of person. And about that ice cream you've got -- save some for the boys, okay? I'm sure they'll come up with a use for it once you let them play nice together. Mwah-hah-hah!!!