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Hold on, i didn't read the story actually yet, but i had to tell you that i lolled or laughed at your email! iamsobad! lol! well, ill go read your story now! see ya, *throws cookie and eats some watermelon bubble gum* *looks down at cookie lying on the floor, picks it up, eats it, walks off singing joyful tune* ^_^

Okay, back again. AHH! I still havent read the whole story, but i have to tell you something. THE CHEERLEADING BIMBO!?!? LOL! THE STUPID POEM! ahh, and you know what? I have a math teacher named ms.jones too. she's got gray hair too! and she is also tight lipped. but she wears so much makeup that its peeling off her face -_- *back to reading*

AHHILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT (and yes, this is as hard to type as it is hard to read) OMG! YOU HAVE TO TOTALLY UPDATE! 0.00001 of a second? LOL! so damned skinny i went flying? I LOVE IT! *room turns dark, lights crash, and my face gets all shadowy) UPDATE OR ELSE!!!!!! I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN WITH MY SPORK HERE AND WILL FOLLOW YOU AND WILL PLAY HIDE AND GO SEEK (as long as im hiding first! ^_^ Oh, and this tree is base!) AND WE WILL CLIMB A TREE (oh and that camel thing was hilarious along with the garden stuff and the wanker! i like laughed every sentence!) AND WE WILL FALL AND DIE (and that dude on the headstone was funny too!) AND WE WILL EAT YOGURT!*lights turn on, shadows lift, and im smiling* Have a great day! *skips out of sight*
*dun dun dun!!!!!!!*

*spits out cookie with bubble gum on it and makes a disgusted face* *smiles, runs away*

GAH I STILL LOVE IT! but it bothers me that he thinks he is a 12 yr. old druggie. i want him to know he's beaten and that hes sixteen! I LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR! BUT IF YOU DON'T UPDATE...*holds up spork* please update! I LOVE IT!

See? I told you you should post here, you have already 10 reviews ^_^
Anyway, I loved this chapter. Poor Mark, having suffered so much. I'm not surprised Joe was shocked, seeing him with all these scars ... And I do wish for a happy ending for both of them.

omg omg Omg OMg OmG oMG omG OMG!WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!?!?!?!?!? OMG *hyperventilating* *starts crying, stops, pulls out spork* do you know what this means? GAHHHHH! please please please please post PLEASSE!

OMG! i really want you to update. please? i have resorted to begging :( plus, if you dont post, you'll have some totally dissapointed ppl. PLEASE!

You know what? I will keep reviewing and bugging you if you don't post. :(( And i really really really hope that these count as more than 1 review :D

lol. ok np i'll get your next chapy sometime today. but i got to write it first lol. i fear the spork. aw man that poor cookie.
give me like 10-12 hrs. and hold your horses:)
til then goodnight.
i'll mail u teeta ty.