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for I Broke Down

by eroburn

person Harryfanficfan
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!! I didn't really think i would like this fic, (i mostly stick to the Harry Potter ones:D) well, i really and truthfully like your story. Please update because i will check regularly!
person o2xquisite
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I AM LIKE STARTING TO CHECK THIS THING LIKE EVERY FIVE MINUTES AND ITS DRIVING ME !!!!!!!NUTS!!!!!!!! I AM YOUR LOYAL READER! *bows* :D oh and PLEASE UPDATE SOON! OR ESLE!!!!! okay, i think i will stop threateninig you *bows again* PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!!!!
person o2xquisite
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*holds up spork*
person o2xquisite
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nope not done yet! :D *puts spork closer to face*
person SheffieldHld
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm this is a very interesting story and im excited to see what happens next! Please post as soon as possible!
person SODA
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but I love this story to much so Im reviewing again! Update! NEED! MORE! STORY! or smut (in the story that is!), Update, update, update! Btw, I heart you!
person Mew
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice storie, its highly amusing ^^
person jess
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor mark! i love this fic so far. it's kinda confusing when you switch points of view and start over and it makes the story a little dull, for example the bathroom cutting scene. you should have told us what mark was doing in joe's point of view because saying it in both took away the drama surrounding it. i love it anyway, so update soon.
person Sekre
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, so he's a cutter huh? Poor guy. Though judging from Joe's pov, he doesnt seem the type of person to use somebody ... but ya never know.
person Canis
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff* It's over... *sniff* *crys for several minutes before gets a hold of self* Um... that didn't happen. Ahem... Anyway. *falls to knees* UPDATE!!!!!! Please, I beg you. This is so bleeding awesome. Please update. Please?! Please?! Please?! Please?! Please?!

*bursts into tears again*