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Hah! I found some time! I read the chapter!

My God, what a chapter it was! You really made me think about the things Mark was talking about. It felt so real when reading, so urgent ... Poor Mark. And his dream, so ... I can't find words.
I would gladly kill that sick bastard of his father for making him suffer so much. I only hope he will find a little happiness with Joe.

Ero, I did send you the third chapter, right? You got it? If no, why didn't you tell me before? I have it beta'd and I was sure I sent it to you.

Ok, huggles for now because in 15 minutes I'm starting my work (ugh)

your fan,
teeta

Ero,

That's evil! It's five am here and I just turned on my comp to check my mail and flicked to AFF to see what's going on. I see you've got a new chappie and I have no time whatsoever to read it. If that's not evil ... Well, I guess I will have to wait patiently at least 10 hours more to be able to read the chapter. Will wait very impatiently. Then you will get the real review. But I'm glad that you are more or less alive and were able to update ^_^

This was really good. I loved it. I can't wait to read more ^.^ Update soon, please!

I was reading your betaed one and thought you didnt update. It made me so sad! I thought you stopped, Im so glad you didnt! Great chapter, update soon please!!!

Teeta recomended this story to me and I'm happy that I took the time to read it. It was funny, sad and angsty all at the same time. Poor Mark, he really needs someone, maybe it's the Adonis, lol. He's cute and at the same time one can't help but to feel sad for him.
Hm... please update as soon as you can.

Wow so well written and sad. Mark is such a great character - angsty and funny in the way he's so lost in his own little world. It's great that you write from both their points of view. Even though it's the same scene because it's being told by a different person it's still different. I think it's so great that Joe thinks he's twelve - I can't wait to find out what he'll do when he finds out Mark's older! I can't wait for your next update!!!

So, where is this update you speak of? UPDATE!!!!

AGG! YOU STILL HAVEN'T EVEN UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHH!!! IM GOING CRAZY OVER HERE!!!!! ahh, i can always revert to my original plan. *grins evily* *pulls out newly polished spork from pocket* *grins evily* *whispers something into your ear* *grins evily* *mutters something under breath* *grins evily* I SHALL UNTIE YOUR SHOES AND HANG YOU UPSIDE DOWN BY YOUR TOES IN THE DUNGEON SIDE BY SIDE WITH FILCH GRINNING EVILY AND EATING YOGURT (with my spork mind you..) WHILE FORCING A COMPUTER FOR YOU TO TYPE ON!!!!! MUAHMUAHMUAUAHUAHGUGUENALKDSJJAOVCNEAPOXKDNEOA!!! (my evil laugh)MUAHMUAHMUAUAHUAHGUGUENALKDSJJAOVCNEAPOXKDNEOA!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE GIRLY!

I liked chapter three, it was sad yet amusing--in the way that it builds the newly dicovered relationship-to-be (or so it seems so far) and delves into the plot =] <33s
Love Mew.~/

OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! i will die witout your storys! i lvoe you!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! :) oh, and ireally like your stories!