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YAY!!!!! new chapy! (does happy dance, but trips over junk on the floor, cause room is such a mess) but now i've read this one so can we get another one soon? please, please, please, please!

This has been sort of a bad day.

I had to delete 4 reviews:(
as much as i hate reviewing my own stories. o2xquisite please for the love of god use the enter button.
literally you made my review page so wide i couldnt even read it. it was like 40 pages wide.
so use... the space bar.
the enter button. something.
i had to delete 4 reviews to fix it. and u know how much i hate doing that.
please continue your reviewing:) with spaces! lol and the enter button.
huggles
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this is one of the reviews. (with spaces added)

(i did not write this review)
oh, my, flippen gosh. you know, that review i wrote was like 32 pages long! and it only SHOWED UP AS ONE FLIPPEN PARAGRAPH!?!?!?GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( im so sad. believe me. i am. *sniffle* Oh, well, i ll send you the shortened version. "You know we'll be gettin some, gettin jiggy just 4 fun." lol. no but I LOVE YOUR STORYIES! well, "im just sitting here daydreaming about you and all the things you do. girl feels so right. and all i know is your the one for me, that special kindly day in my life in my life." lol another lyric (i didn't know the last part). but i want you to join. i made THIS IS THE MOST TOTALLY AWESOME STORY I HAVE EVER READ AND IF YOU DON'T UPDATE, A) ill send the longer review and we will have casserole for supper tonight. HAHWAYSHEGKANIV WGKK! if you don't like this story, I will send you an email telling you to fuck off. GAHHHHH NOOOOOO. yep, i actually wrote it. the word. the mamba jamba. the big bad. yea. now im gonna go out and buy some crappy leather jacket with a spikey dog collar and shave my head into a mohawk and and and and and BUY OUT HOT TOPIC!!!!! lol no. ill just buy a garden gnome. no." CAUSE BABY GIRLS A QUEEN. BUT THE QUEEN IS JUST A PAWN WITH A BUNCH OF FANCY MOVES. AND SHES MADE ME A FEIND. I WONT BE WITHDRAWN CAUSE I GOT NOTHIN TO LOSE. BRAVO! SHES AT THE BOTTOM OF THE BOTTLE, SHE HAVING ONE MORE SWALLOW, FROM BEING OH SO HALLOW. I FIND IT FUNNY SHE CAN NEVER FIND HER CAR KEYS." persona 2: okay, enough with the lyrics o2xquisite! persona 1: sorry, im listening to music, i just can't help myself!' *sob* you don't have to be so mean. *persona 1 suddenly has great interest in her shoes* persona 2: look im sorry okay! don't be such a flippen crybaby. *persona 1 runs away screaming and crying* okay, im done with the third person as well. well just come to it plz plz plz! ありがとう! (means thank you!) do you know how to say thank you in japanese? I DO! arigato! well anyway, thats how you spell it in japanese i guess, except going down, i think? well anyway, enough of the totally HIGH OFF A ROCK o2xquisite. bye. *o2xquisite HAS LEFT THE BUILDING EVERYONE! COME OUT OF HIDING AND YOU CAN RELEASE THOSE BREATHS YOU'VE BEEN HOLDING!*




*sneaks in the back door* hey eroburn, I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND IM REALLY GLAD THAT YOU UPDATED! YOU TOOK SO LONG! MEANIE! oh! everyone is so relaxed! ill just go then! i can feel those vibes of not wanting to be here ya know! SHITALKI MUSHROOMS! hehe i didnt say it! GO TO HELL BITCHES! Holy crap! did i just type that??!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!? wow. *angry mob aproaches* ah! didn't really mean it ya know. *takes step back* *mob takes step forward* okay, ill leave the way i got in. sshh though, i got in through the back door. dont tell no one im here! *runs frantically in any direction away from the mob and slams into a glass panel, knocked unconsious* oh well guys, just carry on. HEY BOB? 'yea?' get me a beer to celebrate! 'but maam, your underage!' i don't give a flyin rats ass! ' FINE! NO NEED FOR CUSSIN MATE!' *lives happily ever after (sorta, o2xquisite fell into a coma and eventually died from lack of medical treatment because of blood loss and a head wound and 3 cracked ribs and of malnutrition. but, that just added to the majority of the people's happiness)* *now in the year 4000 and the ruler of the world comes over o2xquisite's dead fossilized body* poor girl. you know girly, your in my way! *steps on o2xquisite's head and walks away* (nobody saw o2xquisite again) *o2xquisite's ghost comes down to see her ugly, grotesque body* " I bet you want a tissue huh? here." *hands tissue to immobile body* " YOU KNOW WHAT? FINE DON'T TAKE THE FLIPPEN TISSUE! I DECLARE YOU UNWANTED AND UNLOVED! * takes out a stamp and slaps it into the girls crumbled forehead with the red bold letters spelling 'rejected' on it* "HAHA! HAVE FUN IN HELL! * flies away* *o2xquisite's body has a single tear roll down its face* *nothing happened ever again to o2xquisite's body*








BLAH

So sad, poor Mark. ;_;
Don't know what to make of this Joe character though. ^_^'

Love the story! Keep up the good work!

*hugs*

There is so much pain in Mark that it makes me sad. I like his wild imagination though, his dreams are quite vivid. And I can't wait to see Dude's face when he finds out that Mark is 16.

"Time for my bitch mode." xDDDD Aww. I always feel so bad for Markie. Psychologically, he is so messed up... It makes me wanna just, like, hug him. ^^;; But you do a good job with his thoughts. Congratulations, I'm officially addicted. Update soon.. or I'll... I'll... uhh... Hmm. I was never good with threats. Bribary instead?

Fomg. You have to write more! ^^ [insertavidfangirlthreathere] xD I luv teh storyyyy. I love the sense of humor too. Rawr. I just love all of it!! ^^

Two very good chapters, thank you for them! How old Mark really is? I'm not sure if you told that somewhere or not. Um, anyway, glad that Joe took him to his home, hope that the little guy can start getting better now. and now I really want some italian food, dammit, Oh well, one can't always have everything.

I'm so glad you update quickly. This story is really great. I think Mark plays too many RPGs, though, with an immagination like that.

Update soon! I can't wait to read thier reaction when they finally find out Mark's 16 ^.^

Yay, I like pizza. Thank you! Its funny that Joe thinks Mark is 12 or something. He's gonna be shocked when he finds out. I love this story! Great chapter, update soon please!!!!!

*flying tackles story*
You must update. Mark's half delusional state of mind makes me so sad... and his fathers an ass.
Though I do wonder what Joe's reaction to Mark's age will be....
Update soon please