rate_review Reviews

*tackles again* Yeps. Tackles are quite fun, thogh not as much for the one tackled.

Aaaaaanywho, I still think this is a wonderful story. Poor Mark is delusional. Poor 'Adonis' is perverted. Its a hard nut life.

AND (as I sadly forgot because Prince of Ramen pounced on me), UPDATE SOON!

Yay, a new chappie! <3 I loved this chapter. And how can it take that long for them to figure it out? Joe and Mark go to the same school!

I just finished reading chapter 6 when you already posted 7. The plot is moving along nicely and I like the originality of the dream sequences. I'm in no way inplying you should change this, but Joe is...strange in his heavy handed means of helping. I found it strange that knowing Mark was abused he chose to wash his mouth out with soap when he freaked and swore (clearly traumatized and disoriented.) I liked the whole scene, though, and the way he unintentionally makes these master/servant situations. They're going to be some couple when they finally get together :)

Man, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Joe will be in shock when he wakes up,
and I can't even imagine what will be Mark's reaction.
Update soon.

Fluffy chapter, yay! And so sweet! Oh, Mark's gonna have a surprise in the morning ... And I can't even imagine what Joe will do when he finds out the girl from his dream turned out to be the supposedly twelve-year-old boy. Haha! And thank you for making it sweet and relatively light before angst strikes again. Very good chapter!

I loved this chapter, loved it. So good. Oh okay 16, yes, I must have missed something there because I think I was the only one in oblivion, that's nothing new really, hehe...
Hm... Wonder what will happen when Mark realises the situation; the rock hard dude behind his back! *muahahaa* Update soon :)

I love your story! But it seems the chapters are too short *pouts* Of course I just whine about short chapters anyways... I wonder when Joe is gonna find out that Mark isn't twelve... probably at school... but I dunno. I await the next update ^_^

Hey! Great story! Keep up the good work sister! ;) Its going really great and i can't wait for you to update! ;D

:D GAH! KEEP IT UP I LLOVE IT! :D