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April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I love this fic, and glad that the hidden chapters is only an alternate ending. Though you gave fair warning about it, it still made me teary.
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April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW I JUST READ YOUR RESPONSE AND "DAMN THAT IS DEPRESSING!!!!!" But my lil chickidee We few who are still here will hang with you till the end of this story and any others you may want to post! Also I see you asked for a beta at some point has anyone said they would do it yet???? If not then I would be more then happy to do just that, but of course that is up to you we can do a trial and if you don't like what I do then no biggie I'll still be a fan! let me know I look forward to the unicorn!! read ya laters!
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April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you make me cry , the story is so good i love it, i want the father to die i hope you have a sweet revenge just for him, a happy note i will love to see the face of Joe when will find that Mark has 17 years so good
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you noticed this or not but you have more then tenthousand hits for this story!!! I'm enjoying it don't get me wrong but sometimes we readers don't always have a comment about the story we are reading we still want it to continue and besides some may not even know how to review. SO don't put yourself down and send me and email with updates and secret pages please wolfluv131313@gmail.com read ya laters!!!
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April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, they are still people out there reading your story! Please do not stop uploading:)
I was glad to see an updated and frankly speaking can't wait to see Joe's reaction when he finally finds out that Marc is in high school, hehehe.
I was glad to see an updated and frankly speaking can't wait to see Joe's reaction when he finally finds out that Marc is in high school, hehehe.
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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
its definately interesting winterhanson@yahoo.com
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March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story. The style sometimes is a bit "unpolished" but I think you will improve with more practice:) What is important is that the characters are interesting and feel real. I like Mark's violent, revengeful thoughts - it makes him way more interesting than if he were just a meek lamb. Their inneer monologues are also quite amusing (the dude tombstone did it for me). Good job and I am looking forward to read more!
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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm this is very interesting! Please post more!
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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love love love more please
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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, can't wait for getting to know more about MCs, hope you will up another chapter soon;)