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for I Broke Down

by eroburn

schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey that's true. I'm always too lazy to rewiev now when I have to log in. But hey ,you hold power even over your swadow readers. You say : I won't update if no rws. And here I am rushing to log in and typing faster then I can think just so that you would update. Here, I'll stop my rambling and conclude. The story is either great or highly addictive - probbably both. Please update. No, really...
person Tristram
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, but I'm anxious for a little more action. I noticed a mistake too. You mention Shawn sitting on a comfy looking chair when I believe you ment to say Joe. Well hope you get 16 reviews soon because I can't wait for the next update :)
person Kiira
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating! Poor Mark, he sure is messed up, huh? Those dreams of his are wicked. Hope to read you soon!
16 reviews huh? You're creedy, lol ^_^ I've never had so many. Oh well, but yeah, I share your love for reviews so I guess I understand.
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! love the new chapter. but seriously I know we bug you to update, but sleep is important. I'm sure most of us would rather wait a day for an update over you exausting yourself.
person eisheth
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know I love this story and I check it every day to see if its updated. Thank you for writing it! :)
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sadness.... No new chapies. I check and check for updates, eachtime getting my hopes up only to have them dashed against the jagged rocks of life.
You are cruel I tell you, cruel!!!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! We had to actually go to school!!!!!! YOU KNOW HOW TIRED I WAS?!?!? THEN I CAME HOME LOOKING FORWARD TO A NICE RELAXING EVENING FULL OF HOMEWORK AND READING ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR CHAPTERS!!! yea, i actually imagine that I can sit by the fire with my laptop, drinking hot apple cider and snuggling up with my boyfriend who is asleep on my shoulder while im reading and under a blanket ^_^ that's my fantasy. SEE WITHOUT YOUR CHAPTERS IM INCOMPLETE!!!! Please write some more, yea, im sure all your fans are practically swooning at your feet by now but, YOU MUST WRITE MOOOORRREE! please? pretty please? AND IF JOE DOESN'T ACCEPT HIS FEELINGS THEN IM GONNA HAVE TO GO IN THERE TO KICK SOME SERIOUS ASS! just saying! but you know, it is not right to have a story like this! THEY SHOULD MAKE ADDICTING STORIES ILLIGAL!
and Wow, I like this chap and if no one else does then...MAY THEM BE THE LOG IN YOUR TOILET! Um, it was a stupid saying my friend made up...plz don't ask...Um uh yeah, PLEASE UPDATE SOOON! ^_^ Glad we could have this chat...O.O
I'm so weird...and I just pointed out the obvious...-_- oy, I'll just shut my mouth...-_-
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God...please...if you love me then...plz ask her to update again with me. ^_^ PLZ UPDATE! ...HEY! YOU UP THERE! WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY IT TOO? *a boom of thunder is heard and rain starts to fall* O.O plz don't hurt me...I AM SORRY! *rain stops* uh hehe, demanding as I may be he is kinda uh persuasive...um not in "that" way gross!...plz update. And remember...THE LOGS IN YUR TOILET!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG!!!!!! GAHH! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE????? ITS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART! SOMETIMES I WISH THAT I SAW YOUR STORY LATER ON SO I WOULDN'T HAVE AS MUCH WAITING MAN! ooh! tomorrow is supposed to be a snow day, so i think im gonna read this story all over again! ^_^ hehe! but if you do not update, A FLYING PIG WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE AND GIVE YOU THREE WISHES AND WHEN YOU WISH FOR SOMETHING, IT WILL GIVE YOU THE OPPOSITE! MUHUHAHUHAHUHA! *smirks* AND HAIL ALL YOGURT AND THEIR MIGHTY REIN OVER EROBURN!!!!! :D sporkie!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cmon cmon Cmon CMon CMOn CMON! I HAVE TO READ MOOOOORRRREE! -enter-
PLEASE FOR PETSIE'S SAKE, MY TOES ARE FREEZING AND I WANT HOT CHOCOLATE -enter-
AND A COOKIE!!!!! AND I WOULD OH SO LOVE IT IF YOU WOULD UPDATE LIKE -enter-
EVERY TWO DAYS!!!! GAAAHHH! I WOULD BE IN HEAAAVEEEN!!!! UPDATE NOW NOW NOW -enter-
I HAVE CHECKED IT A TON TON TON AND IT STILL WASN'T EVEN HERE! IT'S LIKE 3:12 AND I KNOW I WILL HAVE TO GET OFF SOON FOR THEIR DAILY CHECKY THINGY. -enter-
thats actually really sad that i stay up that late every night -_- -enter-
BUT FOR YOUR STORIES I WOULD!!!! GAHHHHHH! DOON'T MAKE ME THREATEN YOUUU!!!! haha no enter :D