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for I Broke Down

by eroburn

schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, eroburn,
I am going to add 'I Broke Down' to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List), posted in Rants/Journals section,
It's a great story, like it a lot :)
person teeta
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ero,

I have been patient, very patient. But you're driving me crazy! I have updated twice! I have ... GAH! I need you to update, you hear me?! If you don't update, I will ... make Kyle rape Uri, I seriously will! If you want to rescue the poor kid, you better update!

You see what you're making me do? I am seriously considering hurting my character ...

Please, ero, don't make us wait any longer, I really want to read on. Please!

I will be your beta if you want but, please!!! do update!
person Josie
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I've been lurking. I admit it. But I love reading this story and I hope there really will be more? Waited a long time for updates, wanna see how things progress! The only thing that pissed me off was Joe putting soap in Mark's mouth. That was unacceptable, Joe! Other than that it's sweet. When is Joe ever gonna ask Mark his age?? He's not 12, let there be smut! Umm, he should probably get help with his trauma first though... Ack, I'm just rambling. I'm usually a much better reviewer! But I do love the story.
Josie (1more_sickpuppy on LiveJournal)
person SODA
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are gonna make me cry! Its been like...forever and I still dont have this story to read. Yep, Im definatly gonna cry! *cries* Please update! I miss Mark and Joe, and I want them to be freaky to eachother lol! Just like I know they want too. Update soon please!!!!
person ~~*N*~~
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! Thank you so very much for the extra-long chapter!! It makes the wait much more bearable. I really liked this update. I'm thrilled that Joe tossed the knife -- I think evil was an apt description of the thing. And I'm looking forward to seeing how Mark copes with having to keep his promise to stop cutting, especially since it is an addiction, and all. Oh, and thank you, thank you for all of the fun yumminess toward the end of the chapter! I hope there will be more of that soon, too! I can't wait for the next chapter, and to see how you'll include Jean-Paul Sartre. Keep writing!!
person SODA
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update! Please? I'll cry! I miss this story!! Update soon please!!!!!
person SODA
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Euroburn, I see you on lol! Your not allowed to be on and enjoy the stories intill you UPDATE! Bad girl! or boy(oops, if you are a boy!). Go update!!!
person o2xquisite
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am trying so damn hard to review but im flippin grounded flippo! crapcicle! nooo! but anyway, crappey life it is when your grounded...:( well, i check the thingy almost every day in the bathroom! (i mean come on? who gets grounded at this age?!?!?) (i know where they keep my baby :D) lol, kay, I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FARR WHOOOPEE! kay, gotta go, see, ya, be, back, on ,later! :)
person KousukeAsazuki
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, finally finished reading it all^^ I've got to say, it actually kept my interest the whole time and I want to read more. I don't know what else to say other than I hope you get the next chapter out soon!
person arillia
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay I get to be reviewer #11! so please update soon. Hope your internet agrivations are no more, cause they can be anoying little buggers.