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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOO!!!!! YEAA! ANOTHER ONE! I just can't get over it! its like, starving some slave (me) and then giving him a WHOLE FLIPPEN TURKEY TO EAT!!! wow! its OMG! YAYYYY!!!! :D THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH! (just UPDATE FASTER! UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE!!!!!!!! whoooo! WHOOO! :D thanks a bunches!!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! A new chapter!! This was great. I do so love Mark. I am very much in agreement with his views on reincarnation. (I'm really rather thrilled to finally have someone else say exactly what I think on that subject, so well done!) And thank you for the nod to Jean-Paul Sartre. You're terrific. So I can't wait to see what you will do next with Mark and Joe, and how on earth Joe will regain Mark's trust now that the precious-but-evil knife has been disposed of. And I am anxious to know what will happen when the delightful but sometimes-dim Joe figures out that Mark isn't a little kid so they can get on to the naughty stuff. The story's great!!!
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! New chappy coming so soon! So you're worse than Mark huh...but then having invented him (LOL) ;) Great job once again.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah still teasing! I assure you, you've reached your goal of becoming a good one. But that's ok 'cause I'm hooked so as long as you don't stop writing I can wait for them to get together. Great job.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated, this chapter was really good!
Banana is good, I love banana, lol. Now you made me to have some of that ice cream, hehe.
When will dude find out Mark's real age?
and also glad to hear that you're going to update next Saturday, thanx ^_^
Banana is good, I love banana, lol. Now you made me to have some of that ice cream, hehe.
When will dude find out Mark's real age?
and also glad to hear that you're going to update next Saturday, thanx ^_^
schedule
March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!
Ero, you would drive a saint up the walls! Feed your damn imp! Give him this chicken or something but do not leave us hanging for over a month here! I was seriously missing this story so much that a part of my block was caused by the lack of this story! Ok, and I will patiently wait for "Do not touch".
On to the review. Definitely worth waiting, I do not understand why you whined about it being poor or something. We need to see more into both boys heads. Action is not everything. So I am glad you made this chapter this way.
Poor Mark, had to learn the painful way about not talking to his childhood ... well, not friends but I cannot find any other word. If he wishes his father went to heaven only to be forever separated from him ... poor Mark, I really feel sad. And knowing you, it is not all. I know what is going to come, I once asked you about it and you confirmed it so ... *shivers* the word poor does not even come close.
Joe was Joe. Trying to help but not really understanding what is going on in Marks head. Not understanding YET. Only getting a small glimpse into Marks thoughts and the terror that is his life. And I know he will cause more pain to Mark ... *sighs* I know it is your story but I wish ... Ok, I am not saying it aloud. I hate it when people say whatshould happen in the next chapter and I already have different plans for it so I am not going to commit the same sin. So coming back to Joe ... I wonder what had him looking strangely at Mark in this ice cream parlor. Whatever it was, it will probably lead to this disaster during the party, right?
I think I should be finishing this freakishly longish review. Sorry for the lack of apostrophes here but somehow the review board does not work properly today. Oh, I am copying this review. I will not write it again.
Lots of love for you and your impish muse,
-E-
Ero, you would drive a saint up the walls! Feed your damn imp! Give him this chicken or something but do not leave us hanging for over a month here! I was seriously missing this story so much that a part of my block was caused by the lack of this story! Ok, and I will patiently wait for "Do not touch".
On to the review. Definitely worth waiting, I do not understand why you whined about it being poor or something. We need to see more into both boys heads. Action is not everything. So I am glad you made this chapter this way.
Poor Mark, had to learn the painful way about not talking to his childhood ... well, not friends but I cannot find any other word. If he wishes his father went to heaven only to be forever separated from him ... poor Mark, I really feel sad. And knowing you, it is not all. I know what is going to come, I once asked you about it and you confirmed it so ... *shivers* the word poor does not even come close.
Joe was Joe. Trying to help but not really understanding what is going on in Marks head. Not understanding YET. Only getting a small glimpse into Marks thoughts and the terror that is his life. And I know he will cause more pain to Mark ... *sighs* I know it is your story but I wish ... Ok, I am not saying it aloud. I hate it when people say whatshould happen in the next chapter and I already have different plans for it so I am not going to commit the same sin. So coming back to Joe ... I wonder what had him looking strangely at Mark in this ice cream parlor. Whatever it was, it will probably lead to this disaster during the party, right?
I think I should be finishing this freakishly longish review. Sorry for the lack of apostrophes here but somehow the review board does not work properly today. Oh, I am copying this review. I will not write it again.
Lots of love for you and your impish muse,
-E-
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... wow... Mark sure has a lot of things in his mind. And I totally agree with him that things with banana are disgusting! The only way I'll ever eat banana is by itself. Yuck anything else with banana. Anyway~~~ I like your thoughtful descriptions, it makes you take on the yearning of each of the characters -- like when reading Mark's thoughts you feel for him, and all --- and I still like how the DUDE thinks Mark is just a little kid, I believe it will be quite interesting to see him realize differently :D
Glad that you updated!
Laaerie
Glad that you updated!
Laaerie
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eroburn, your alive!! I was worried, I missed this story!! Hey, that rhymed! Btw, Im American too! Well, Dominican American, but still American!! NEXT TIME YOU TAKE THAT LONG I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND FORCE YOU TO TYPE LOL:)!! Ha, how ya like that lol! Great chapter, updatre soon please!!!!!
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yayness! The anger out of Mark is a good sign, less life sucks but oh well mentality. It gives us hope for his possible future healing, like he's not going to take everything lying down anymore. He still has a long way to go but there is hope now. loved the chapter
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long - I've been away. Your characters are still my favorites! When's the next chapter coming? I miss reading about Marks crazy thought patterns!