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for I Broke Down

by eroburn

person Evan*
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<3333~ I've always read this, love. Pur-fectly cute. I was actually wondering how old Mark was.....I can't wait to see Dude's-ahem- Joe's (I keep calling him Dude. *headdesk*) face when Mark tells him his real age. Lol. Aw. I <3 this story.
person Evan*
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn AFF. My first review was cut. --;;; Kay. Try #2. Squee. I love this story. I can't wait to see Dude's face when Mark tells him his real age. Maybe then they can have sex. =D Dun mind me. I'm a perv. Heh. Anyway~. I love this story, love. Hope you update soon. <3~

-Evan
person skip
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeease, review! i love this story!
person Laaerie
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear Ero, I will review more if you promise to use the "space bar" :P hehehehehe... you know what I mean. HUGS!! The chappie was good, lots of tension in between those two, and you know I want to see thwm in bed! NOW! go! write it!

Laaerie
person SODA
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very glad to see you alive lol. I hate running to, but I type slow so reading and writing keeps me alive lol. That and my friends. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person vanuk
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its well good i love the dreams, but not quit sure wot there sirpost 2 mean, still good tho p.s is r they going 2 have sex
person teeta
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So you get another review, this time from me. I don't know what number but I hope you'll get the remaining reviews soon.

Because the chappie was so awesome, I would laugh out loud if it wasn't so freaking late here!

The scene in the cinema was priceless, both had the same problem. I just imagined Joe sprinting to the car, god, so hilarious! And Mark, how did he deal with his ... problem? Hating himself?

So the party's next ... And then ...

Gah. I fear it. INC. Me sad. Gah. Stupid prick! Deserves to be castrated. Castrate him, please?

Anyway, loved the chappie. Write more.

-E-
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. . . I didn't get a response to my last review. That not very incouraging. However, I LOOOOOVE this story, so I shall try again!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!! Mark's so cute. I was confused for a while if he really was 12 or something. I couldn't remember his age being mentioned, however I am also very adhd so that might have something to do with it, hee hee. MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
person LamaPie
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it, mark is sooo cute!! and i personal want to see someone kills his dad!! oh and i love the bedroom scene... air so thick u could cut it! keep up the great work cant wait for the next chappi!
person o2xquisite
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.WHOW.IE.ZOW.IE.YOU UPDATED!! OMG!!!! WHOOOO! GREAT CHAPPIE MAN GREAT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!! holy crap, im not kidding, im HYPERVENTILATING!!!!!! WHOOOOOO! THIS CALLS FOR A PARTY! WHOOO! YEAAA!!! YA!! I THOUGHT YOU'D NEVER EVER UPDATE!!! NOOOOO!!! WHOOO! BUT YOU KNOW WHAT???? YOU POSTED ANOTHER FIIIIIICCC! hahhaa! im sooo flippen happy! whooo. wow. i think that was just a tear of happiness!! YOU MADE MY DAY!!!!!! :D WHOOO!!! AGG! YOU BROUGHT ME SOOOOO MUCH JOY!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAA! HAHA! have an awesome day, and iM GONNA GO READ YOUR OTHER FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D