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for I Broke Down

by eroburn

person SODA (again)
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, its SODA again ( as you can see)! Im gonna keep on reviewing, 'cause I love this story!
person SODA (again)
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you happy with all my lil reviews? Cause f your not, I'll cry!
person SODA (again)
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on, you didnt expect me to stop there did you? Im gonna keep reviewing!
person SODA (again)
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, whatcha doing? Typing the new chapter? I hope so...
person SODA (again 2)
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another review deleted! And I dont even remember what I said...But I can sum it up for you, basically it was me saying UPDATE lol!
person Laaerie
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmmm. you know, I am one of those people who like to torment others, so if you are already rolling your eyes, get ready to grab onto your computer *winks*..... Review #1 --- this story has been a ride since the beginning... I started reading it for the heck of it, and because your nickname was weird :D But from the first paragraph I was like 0_O ooooookkkkkkk.... this kid is messed up! and messed up pleases me...... thus story was good!

You see where this is going?

Laaerie... 1...
person Laaerie
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So... because I'ms till evil, and want to see you suffer! ---- *insert evil laughter in here* When you introduced the jock, I was scared... thought OMG please let it not be one of those cliche jock-uke thing! Glad it isn't huh?

Laaerie
person Laaerie
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! you can't go to bed!!!!!!! *snickers* oh, well... this only means I can keep doing this without you seeing it! --- I want a chapter for myself, I'm greedy, me wants smut!

Laaerie... ah yeah #3... forgot number in previous one!
person Laaerie
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So... ending the chppie with him saying about the age thing... you little devil!!! I know your plans already!!!! I just can't wait to see you typing at 6 am!!!

Laaerie
person Laaerie
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so.... forgot the # in the previous... my excuse to post this one... this is #5 BTW... HUGS! Are you hating me yet?! :D muaha! I know I told you before, but I want it to be in record in here, I like the dreaming interludes, they are great! Psychoanalysis needed! you and me... crazy ...

Laaerie... I wonder If I can keep this up... #5!