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for Unconditional love

by Yblue

person Rosei
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23

YBlue,

If only Timmy can remember his own thoughts!

Matt's a decent guy. He treated Timmy pretty well!

Timmy, Timmy, Timmy... What are you going to do to
that boy?!

The conversation in the vehicle was very enlightening!

Like that Timmy is now a semi-autistic, stalker-in-love,
sleep-deprived, confused-youth, ON A MISSION! HA!

Thank you!
R

He's a hero who is overcoming all the trials! {:^D!!!!))))
person Rosei
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!
It might be dead here because of the Olympics!
(Or, it's just dead here!)
person eroburn
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I have followed this story for a while. I looked for it when I came back to aff.
I wait on bated breath for the next chapter.
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how excited I was to see an update so quickly!!!! :) :)

Well, I don't think Back Alley Brandon meant for Tim to go out and fuck anyone he sees. lol

Callum was pretty hot though. At first he seemed so nice in the alley, but then he seemed a tad scary in the van. But Tim was right when he was walking with him to the van thinking, what the hell am I doing? lol

Hopefully Tim will get off of Matt's car. Get off of, not gett of on, lol. I'm sure Matt will NOT be pleased to see a passed-out-from-sex Tim on the top of his car. lol And Brandon will probably flip out and be an ass as usual.

Awesome chapter yblue! :) Thanks for updating so quickly! :)

Oh, I noticed one typo: crouch is supposed to be spelled crotch. To crouch is to squat down or to stay down close to the ground with your legs bent. =)
person capgirl
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
seriously I found this a couple of days ago and have not been able to stop reading. Keep it up, love the complexity between Timmy and Brandon.
person Raven
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wowzerz that was Hott. tim got hes ass rammed lol. hope he meets cal again or brandon or matt yumm idc. wowzerz. at first i wanted him saved, but fuck that lol. that was to damn hot not to read. i wonder if cal does end up being his window cleaner yum i need a window cleaner lk that
person Rosei
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

Wow! I feel so sad! HA!
Seriously HOT chapter! AGAIN!

Timmy is breaking my heart here!
His young voice and confusions are getting
me right here! (Pointing toward left lung.)))

Oh yeah! LOVE THE VAN SEX!
Callum's a dangerously sexy dude!
Thanks for tossing him in!

As we leave our hero lying spread-eagled
over the hood of a Mazda Miata on a cold
night I have to wonder, where the hell is Brandon! HA!

Thank you!
R

person lividfire
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this for a long time, the story summary still cracks me up and so does this pathetic stalker.

I can not imagine what will happen now, our stalker is seriously confused, Brandon might me more missunderstood then Avril Lavigne and this new guy is like PINK without the furry female bits*cracks up*

I'm very patient*lies* to read the new chapter.
Soon:D
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! I was browsing the m/m section by chance (mistapped the link on my phone whilst reading another story) and couldn't believe my eyes at first when I saw you've updated. You made my day<333 Tim is still adorable as ever. He's one of my favourite socially-inept characters (there's tons of fics claiming their mc's a social retard, but I find most of them unconvincing, especially when the mc is physically attractive). Again, thanks for updating, welcome back and I hope you'd stay this time around;)
person asf
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"“I don’t make a habit of fucking in my van,” I hear him say apologetically. My sexy alley stranger is not a demon after all. He was sent down by my god to help me get a life."

his narration is so hilarious sometimes..!