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I'm back! ZOMG Tim had an epiphany! and it only took him getting drunk, having sex with Brandon and a random Drug Dealer(who I really like), and talking with Matt to finally have it. That's pretty extreme, but an epiphany is an epiphany. So I'm glad for him. I hope he works some things out, because being in a constant state of confusion will definitely bring in more problems(like his mother and psychologist). I look forward to the next chapter!

I am so happy this story is back! And I love how things are evolving. I like that Tim is starting to see Brandon more like the damaged, lost man he is and less like the absolute god he was before. Unlike Brandon, Tim is learning from his errors. I hope he will be the one to save Brandon from himself and from his past demons. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Please don't let him end up like Brandon! Surprisingly enough i liked Callum (which i probably shouldn't considering his profession...) but maybe he could date Ryan (for real) instead?

I really, really like Matt! I think he's a great guy. And from what he was saying and the way he said it, I got the impression that he was once in love with Brandon too, but realized he'd never get the love from him that he wanted. So, being bff's is the second best thing, right? lol

I'm glad he was there to help Tim. Tim is so lost. He was just about to hook-up with some random, older stranger, for what? I don't remember from the last chapter; did Callum slip him something like some aphrodesiac? (however it's spelled) He was acting like he was high on something.

Oh, one thing. Matt mentioned it in this chapter, how Brandon was pissed that Tim was at the table in the mall. How come Tim can't explain himself and tell him that HE was there first, before Brandon, Matt and the rest of them even got there?

Anyway, Tim really needs to reevaluate his idea of "get a life" b/c he has it all wrong! lol

Excellent chapter as usual yblue! And again, you write so well I would never guess you weren't a native English speaker. :)

You know, I hope Timmy doesn't try to use Ryan to make Brandon jealous. I don't think it would work. Brandon is on such a self-destructive mission; screwing anyone around (well, anyone hot as he stated once to Timmy) and getting stoned. He's such a bad influence on Timmy.

And Ryan is way too good to be used like that.

I feel we're just scraping the surface of this story, aren't we? This is great on so many levels, Tim's voice is so vivid and the tone is just the right shade of humorous. Being a huge fangirl of Tim x Ryan I hope that Brandon gets lost ... but we'll see what happens with that, right? It's pretty cool how at this point we have no way to tell whether this story is about 'personal growth with Ryan' or 'perversion with Brandon'. Awesome story, please update soon!

Woot! You're back! It's been so long that I went back and read the story anyways even before I saw your A/N on Chapter 21. So check on that! I vaugely remember this story, but it feels brand new and I would totally read the new chapters if it weren't for the fact that I am so tired. So you will get more reviews from me soon! Just not tonight XP

I saw this story when I was posting one of my own, liked the summary and got drawn in. Tim is such a compelling character and I enjoy trying to work out what the other people in the story are like when, as a reader, you only have the 'Tim version'. It's a bit like viewing the world through distorting lenses. I particularly like how your characters grow. Ryan started off as an excuse and is now a person. Matt was someone who appeared in Brandon's kitchen but in chapter 23 he popped into three dimensions as a decent human being. Please try to finish the story - I know how hard that can be but it would be worth it.

Awesome you restarted, I completely reread the whole story, as it's been a while, and DAMN you, I come to kick your butt if you don't keep updating soon.
Can I be in the Matt fanclub while I'm in Ryan's, or am I obliged to keep only one cap?
I'm glad you changed the chapter cut before the Cal part, as I really hated it before to be kept on the cliff like that.

Thanks for being such an awesome writer, and I'll be completely impatient untill you post the next chapter :)

Dunno, I don't think I've ever saw someone so confused like Avril Lavigne in my life so it felt natural to compare.
And Callum did seem awfully alike like PINK( tough act at least on the surface, more fear from gel in the hair then of being hit) so yeah, it i wasn't bashing the story.

Like I said I've been reading it 'long time' and it was then and is now unusual and you are almost paranormal as how good you are writting Timmy's inner monologues:D

I suppose Tim-Tim will smooch with Ryan to get Brandon to notice him; which is a mistake imho since Brandon wont pay him any heed.