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Don't make me wait for the next chapter too long!
I don't get why people wouldn't like the previous chapter, I thought it was awesome, but you know I'm not much of a reviewer :)
I prefer to admire silently or something like that.
I'm happy to actually hear Tim admitting to himself Brandon is no god. It's a start. And I'm happy he ran right to Ryan. Still love Ryan!

Poor Tim. He's still so in love with Brandon. At least he doesn't think of him as a God anymore. That's a step in the right direction.

Brandon is messed up, Tim is messed up; they both need therapy. lol

Thank God for Ryan though. Ryan is a godsend. Despite his feelings for Tim, he still wants to be a good friend to him. And Tim certainly needs a good friend. And I think I know where Ryan gets his compassion from; his dad. His dad is great; kind and compassionate. He is what Tim needs as a good role model. Too bad Ryan's brothers are tools though. lol

Another awesome chapter yblue! Can't wait for the next one! :)

Who didn't like your last chapter?! I was going "OMG! What is going to happen next!" and that is what i consider a great story. When authors leave us wanting more/ make us read through the entire 20+ page story in one sitting/ squeeze our heart from angst etc. Thanks for completing and sharing this story even though you have no obligation to. Just follow your feeeeeeels cause that is how great stories and dreams are formed. Am I right? Yes I am! Hahaha, I'm so haappy to get to find a lovely surprise waiting for me first thing in the morning ;D I should go off to class now. Lecturer will killz me with her glare if I get in late again.

waif as well.
:)

i love how expressive your characters are.
i dont think i will ever get enough of this story

I didn't think the last chapter was so bad. I definitely saw the disillusionment coming. I am looking forward to where you go from here. By the way since it is the first word of the game I would go with Wharf. He'll get more points.

Hello! Im sad peoples review might not have been what you wanted. I enjoy youor chapters and want you to update soon! I wonder what kind of things our lil boy is going to get into. If he will meet the drug dealer again? Will he get a job to hopefully soround himself in normalness? does that make sense? lol..
Im truly happy he has a friend now

Hey Yblue, how are you? Just checking in to see how you're doing. Ok, I was also checking to see how the next update is going. lol I guess this is a little poke, poke, nudge, nudge. You seemed to be on an awesome roll and then nada. :(

So I hope you're busy writing the next awesome chapter! ;)

I don't know who I feel sorry for more, Tim or Brandon. Brandon just knocked himself off Tim's extremely high pedestal. Now even though Tim just can't push a button and 'unlove' Brandon, he doesn't see him as some holier than thou person. Which is very good. It's a breakthrough for Tim. He needs to know Brandon is human just like he is.

And Brandon, now I feel so bad for him. And abuse and being taken advantage of is all he knows. And how can he love another person if he can't even love himself? So sad.

I'm glad Tim has Ryan as a friend; I just don't want Ryan to get any hopeful ideas about Tim. I love Ryan too much to see Tim break his heart. And I actually commend Tim for not wanting to use Ryan to get to Brandon. :)

What a magnificent chapter yblue! Anxiously awaiting the chapter with Ryan in it! =)

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That was a good chapter! In the sense that it makes the story go in a direction that I like xD

I read your review-reply; only a couple chapters left?! As in, this story will have no more than 30 chapters in total? Wow. I never wanted this story to end... :( I'm going to be one of those wankers who beg for a sequel.

It ate my long review.
I wasn't surprised by this.
It just validated my own ideas.
They live on the pedastals on high,
we put them there forgetting that they
too are human, broken as we are.
They can't live there forever,
so when they fall,
we think less of them
for proving that we are fools.
I don't know how you are going to
get them from sorrow to
aphrodite's grasp,
but even hercules
did not surrender his love
to death's cold hand.
Do not let him give up,
to surrender to a loveless
existance.

hate to use this twice in one week
but Beautiful by Eminem fits this perfectly