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Good luck with your nano writing project. I look forward to you coming back to this when time permits. I want to know what happens to Tim - congratulations on making us care about him.

I just love your story and how its progressing. Thx for this update - one of the best so far d^.^

Maybe you should include an incest warning in your summary. The first chapter was very intriguing and fun, but I had to stop reading when I got to the incest bit. Just not my cup of tea.

Hey yblue! Good luck with your Nanowrimo! Your writing is so fantastic, I'm sure you will definitely win something! :)

Liam was cracking me up! He of all people, he the "I'm a dick sometimes too" is in his second year of psychology! Imagine that!

I can't believe he actually sent that text to Brandon. I really thought he was going to use reverse psychology on him and write something like, "I'm through with you, I'm through thinking of you, you'll never see me near you again. I've found someone who can love me for me"...blah, blah, blah, you get the idea. But no, Liam wrote the exact things Tim told him. Why would Tim thank him? It will probably cause even more problems. lol

I'm actually glad Tim's mother realized what happened all those years ago. Maybe she can lift the grounded punishment b/c after all, Tim has plans to see Ryan on Saturday. lol

Terrific chapter as always yblue! You constantly leave me wanting more! :)

Good luck again with Nano! I'll be waiting patiently (well, not so patiently)for December's update! =)

Good for Tim for beating that prick Michael up! Although now he's gonna have to watch his back. I wonder what Brandon's reaction will be when he finally comes face to face with his cousin. Busted face or not, I wonder what he'll be thinking. Of course if he finds out that Tim is the one who busted Michael's face he might actually feel good that someone stuck up for him. But I'm sure Michael would never admit to someone like Tim doing that. Gah, I'm rambling. Sorry.

I'm glad Tim will be hanging out with Ryan over the weekend. He better not find someplace else to be (Brandon's). Ryan is good for him; he needs Ryan and I think Ryan needs him. I think Ryan enjoys trying to cheer Tim up.

And Tim....he'd much rather hook-up with Callum the dealer than someone sweet who really cares about him (Ryan). Sure, Callum wants him, but only for the sex; he doesn't care about Tim the person. Tim needs to stop equating sex with love. He should know by now they are two completely separate entities.

Another awesome chapter yblue! :)

oh sweet revenge.
mmm
i could eat this with a chilled spoon
and it still wouldn't taste sweeter
nothing better than a little comeuppance.
and little shy tim kicked his ass,
for himself, and his love
for when the prince comes to save his love,
he battles foes.

(26) I know I shouldn't cheer for violence, especially since it isn't the healthiest course of action Tim should tak (I mean he'll somehow have to heal from that trauma, too, of having caused harm) but YES! ^^ I see you're beginning to wrap up everything, to bring us to a sense of closure in relation to the Michael-flashbacks storyarc(?). Thanks for the review reply, by the way! Looking forward to the next chapter! Milly

ah how i love prompt reactions. lol jk. HA! take that jack ass yea kick him agiain tim!!! OH and i hope he does run into calvin again loves me some calvin.

POke wher are you going with this right now. you have come to a crossroads and i need to know because tim is my god right now lol

That chapter pleased my inner Tim x Ryan. I'm both happy and sad to know that the story is about to come to a close. I'm curious about something - the psychology element of the story. Is it something that you know because of your trade/studies/close one, or just something you took an interest into as a writer? Anyhow it definitely makes the story interesting, and it's not at all in your face as it could easily be. Kudos!