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Y, I have been meaning to read this since you updated! But I never forgot; I wrote it down so I wouldn't forget to read it. lol

Yes, Ryan is a terrific friend. Even knowing how he feels about Tim, he's still able to talk to him about Brandon.

And Brandon. I guess Tim was right; Brandon only wants you if you hurt him in some way. So maybe Brandon does want to change. Maybe that's why he called Tim. Or maybe he just needs someone who will tell him how great he is and how much he means to them. Maybe he needs an ego boost. Or maybe he just wants to tell Tim everything about him and Michael.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter to find out! :)

Great chapter Y! Oh, and I found myself trying to think up words with Tim's letters. Couldn't come up with anything. lol

AHHHHH!

I'm so glad that you updated!!! And I'm awed with Tim's development, he's heis own person now, thinks of Brandon but in a practical and intelligent way and it's in his way of being a better person.

Adored this chapter, dear. Amazing dialogues as well; Ryan is sooo sweet.

Mail me on your next update? jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com

Honestly, I don't understand why others didn't like chapter 23. In fact, chapter 23 was long over due....this story would've seemed completely unrealistic if Tim didn't take Brandon off of the godly pedestal he had him on. A lot of people seem to want a quick fix but in no way could this story maintain its integrity if u just allowed Brandon to be completely undisturbed by Tim and ready to return Tim's affections so readily....especially after all that we've discovered about Brandon and his past....it would just seem unlikely.

I am curious to see where this story is going and how it'll end, but so far you've done a wonderful job characterizing Tim and showing his growth. However, I'd be lying if I said that my heart didn't go out to Ryan. I feel like if Tim didn't hold everyone up to his unrealistic standards, Ryan might actually be good for him....but the masses want what they want, and my bet is that they want Brandon,lol....so yeah.... :/

I don't know whay anyone would dislike chapter 34. In myopinion it was long over-due....I mean this story would've seem completely unrealistic if Tim didn't remove Brandon from the god-like pedestal he had him on; it was only a matter of time after all. Honestly, I don't know how this story could maintain its integrity if Brandon wasn't disturbed by Tim's behaviour and readily returned Tim's affections, especially after all that we've learned about Brandon and his past.

I'm curious to see where this story will go, but so far you've done a wonderful job with Tim's characterization and showing his personal growth. I'd be lying if I said that my heart didn't go out to Ryan because I definitely feel bad for the guy. Especially since I believe that if Tim didn't have such unrealistic standards and hadn't already identified "love" as being what he feels for Brandon - which is really more like obsession but that's all Tim has ever known and the one thing that gave him purpose - I think that Ryan would be good for Tim. Unfortunately, the masses want what they want and my guess is that everyone's begging for Brandon to return Tim's affections....so yeah...:/

I really don't understand Tim's "love" for Ryan...I mean first of all he doesn't know him, up until the fight he too didn't care about Brandon the person but Brandon the god, and love isn't about falling to your knees and doing everything the other person tells you to do.

It's sad that Tim's idea of love is so messed up....the kid would be completely happy just getting treated like dirt...definitely not healthy.

lol. I was a bit worried for Tim at the beginning of the chapter. but I'm glad to see he's still not caving to his old ways. I really really like Ryan! What is it with people (including me) who give up on the good guys.... Such a shame. I liked the fact that Tim recognized what he's really giving up here and how he doesn't want to hurt Ryan again.

Looking forward to next chapter :)

So long between updates I feel like I'm starving for more of your story. To see him keep Brandon waiting to. Wow just wow

I'm surprised, that Brandon called. Somehow I believe that it's not necessary a good thing. Think he might run into someone he probably don't want to meet there.

Sorry if I did not comment the last chapter. Change my internet provider and had to read on my smart phone... Don't like to writhe there since I have no spell check. (English is not my native language)

I thought the last chapter was one of the very best. I adore how he is developing and how he is seeing the world as it is.

lg Marlod

Tim did the right thing and pushed Brandon away. Strange how it took being slapped around and told to leave, to get a fire going under Brandon's butt. lol At least he apologized to Tim for treating him like shit. That is a major breakthrough for him. :)

I am surprised though that Brandon's mother saw affection in Brandon's eyes when he looked at Tim. He's really good at hiding his feelings, let me tell you. I thought he couldn't stand Tim. He actually had regret in his eyes and sadness in his voice when he told Tim he couldn't be anything more to him than a fuck buddy. Well, that's basically what he was implying, right?

The ending confused me though. I didn't realize Tim's mom knew he was gay. I don't remember; was that revealed in a previous chapter?

Anywho...another awesome chapter yblue! As usual, you always leave me wanting more. ;)

this story really sucked me in. Tim is such a strange messed up melting pot and Brandon is even worse, but I still want them to be together. Looking forward to the next installment!