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by Yblue

person Katariina
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. Please continue soon!
person Sunako Kanzaki
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, A little on the creepy side but I guess that's what makes it so good! I can not wait for your next update!

~Sunako Kanzaki~
person midnighteyes
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story.. I love how you laid the ground work... Keep up the good work...
person luckeme
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Being invisible...

is that when it started? In that cellar?

Tim is an interesting character, please continue
person teeta
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uuuu, a new chapter! And so cool! I liked it! The stalker (sorry, don't remember the name) has a very interesting life, indeed. And what a memory! Can't wait to read more, hehe. Well done, Yblue.
person alexa87
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man that must be traumatic for a kid.
Update soon.;)
person Kolgrim
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see your update. You just got me so hooked, I was so sad to have the chapter end, because I really would love to read more. Where are you going with this I keep wondering, I have no idea. I like that all the three stories that I've read from you are very different, but I can always expect them to be good and just the sort of thing that I like to read. So thank you for writing :)
person punkin02
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon....this story is really great.
person Anno.
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'd love to see where this is heading. :)
person teeta
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, a new story, hah? Seems quite fascinating, really. Why does Tim think he is invisible? And he makes up a friend ... But I like him! He has been stalking a man for two years? Wow, that's a long time.I really wonder if Brandon saw him this time. I hope he did. Tim's life is so sad that he deserves to receive some attention at last. On the whole, a very nice beginning, can't wait for another chapter. Oh, and I'm patiently waiting for 'On the outside', I hope you'll get over the writer's block soon:")