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for Unconditional love

by Yblue

person eisheth
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh please update! its sooo good!
person meg
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, what an awesome stalking story! I love it. I'm sad that you won't be updating anymore this month though, I can't wait to see what happens next!!
person Child of the Darkened Moon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At first I thought it wasn't so bad. Now the guy just... it makes it kinda sad really. I don't think he's disgusting but I do feel bad for him. And the other guy-- is an idiot if he hasn't figured it out already. Oh wow... big idiot. Oh well update soon please, this truly is an original piece of work. CotDM
person teeta
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another chappie!

Yay!

And a little hotness too *grins* thank you. I liked it (no, not because of the smuttish part) because it gives a little bit of insight into Tim's obsession. He is a real master of stalking. And getting up at 3 am? My God, I would naver be able to do it, much too lazy, lol. I am dead curious about Brandon. He still doesn't know about Tim stalking him, right? How will he react when he learns the truth? Can't wait!

Oh,and no updates until theend of January? No Tim and Brandon? No Cat and Endy? That's so unfair! But I wish you good luck during the exams and hope once you're free, you will bring us all new chapters. See you!

teeta
person Kolgrim
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just hoping the other day that this story would be updated so thank you Yblue. Wow, Tim really is obsessed isn't he? Wonder what will hapen when the guy founds out, because he will find out, right? Loved the scene, smut and all! good luck on your tests and hope you can soon entartain us again with your wonderful stories.
person silken-skies
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol that had me blushing, update soon! i'm enjoying this
person Canis
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(cheers for the new chapter) Woot!

I'm really liking this story so far. Keep up the good work.
person luckeme
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM


Quality stalking...LMAO!

Poor, poor Tim. If this is what watching does, he's gonna faint and die if he ever makes it into that apartment! I'm imagining it...

er, oh...where was I.

Good chapter, Yblue. =)

I miss your other story too ya know. Not to be pushy or anything.

person sarah
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your writing is excellent! i love the sarcasm and the inner monologue. “Shit.” I curse. ”Open the fucking curtains Brandon!” <- haha that seriously made me laugh. can't wait til he actually talks to this brandon guy!
person sarah
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah my review got cut off, i meant to say that that line was so hilarious! :)