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by Yblue

person Kiira
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice to have you back whit your stories ^_^ Poor Tim, all the teenage hormones and oh so typical curious mother, hihi. and his dad not accepting the news of his son...?... Hm, liked the chapter, I want more, please? :)
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! finally!
thank god a new chap
mabie you wont wait sooo long for then next one...hint hint
lol
lots of love and hugs
person teeta
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! *hugs* It's nice to see you among the active writers again!

So now the review. Poor Tim, really had it hard, first Brandon, now his mom being pitiful while he doesn't want pity at all. And his father being all contempting, ugh ...

You really did a good job showing what a teenager like Tim may feel. I want to see where this will progress to. A very nice chappie and I loved it, even though it was so short *wants more*

^___^ Thanks for the chappie and hoping to read more soon. As soon as it's possible for you.

person teeta
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, one more thing I just noticed ... maybe a spoiler but ...

You have inc warning there, is Tim's father going to ... he certainly seems to have some issues with Tim there, so ...

Uhh, ok, I think you get what I mean so ... just had to take it off my chest ^__^
person LucyCo69
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story sorry never reviewed been having trouble with my password. Hope you update soon.
person Dizdayn
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter! You're getting much more comfortable with Tim. Can't wait to see how he reacts.
Diz
person Kiira
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tim, he got caught! This will screw up most of his free time, won't it? What is the guy to do now, I wonder... Hm, well at least he got some comfort from his mother; cute, and now he sees that it ain't so bad that they'd know that he's gay.

I'm very glad that you updated and can't wait to see more.
person teeta
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are EVIL! Poor Timmy! He got to hear these terrible three words, more hurtful than anything he could have heard ... A cookie for you for being extra cruel ... But I am enjoying this story and I do wonder how (and if) you are going to get them together. A very good (though short) chapter, I will be looking forward to more of this story in the future!
teeta
person luck_eme
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this chapter!...so so love it, love it, love it, love it...

This was the best one so far. Poor Timmy. Now how's he going to spy? How's he going to get the nerve to apologize? There's a fine line between getting creeped out by someone stalking and being flattered by it, ask any celebrity. Timmy hasn't actually interfered with his life, but he acted so scared that, yeah, I'd get creeped out.

It's no wonder he feels pathetic, well, he is but to be obsessed...that must suck. I hope Brandon will like him.

You wrote it so well. I admire that. It could have been just a sad chapter, but instead it was cute. I don't offer to beta, trust me, it has to be a friend, or this case, someone who's work is so great I'd feel honored. If you are serious, let me know. I didn't see many mistakes, though.

Okay, well, it was worth waiting for. Now get some sleep? *hug*

schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I dont think I have reviewed this fic before, but I do read it, and YAYAYYAY YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!! It was very sad, but I am just so glad you are still writing it!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!