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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story because in truth who hasn't had a crush. True he takes it a bit further than most but its still kind of sweet, in a creepy sort of way. Email me when you update at: cobraqueen17@yahoo please and thank you
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I'm not sure if I want him to get with Brandon or Ryan! XD Either way I really enjoy this story. :P
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a dirty whore!!!!!!!!!! Brandon is a slut but poor little Timmy is a horny little turd. So many good quialities in this story. More, more!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tim got caught! And Brandon is quite mean, hm, and very much in love whit himself it seems. Hopefully Tim would just get over him fast, but it's unlikely, yeah? And I hope he'd warm up to Ryan(?)more, hihi. Okay, now I have to hurry to work =_=
Thanks for this chapter; me likes :)
Thanks for this chapter; me likes :)
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
*sheepish grin* I’m glad you liked the review, I know how much I enjoy detailed reviews but to tell the truth … this was subconscious to me, and now I feel a bit … unsure if this review is going to turn alright … hehehe … And thanks for including me in your mailing list! *feels honored*
Ok, the review … yes, so Tim has no purpose in his life … as if his world stopped the moment Brandon told him to keep away. He even counts time! 96 hours! That IS obsession! And the fact that he is surprised life goes on …
Seeing Brandon makes him happy; it means he’s still far away from getting over him. Which means more suffering for him, suffering he willingly accepts, welcomes even. And he worships him, like he would a god. Scratch that, Brandon is his personal god, despite being vicious to him, and in Tim’s opinion his god can do no wrong, no matter how evil he acts.
Hmmm … and Tim’s fixation with being invisible … changed. For a moment there he thinks it’s a disaster but then he accepts the fact he is visible. I can’t predict if it’s good or bad; I would say good because how long a person can go on pretending – and believing it even – that he is invisible? This can only lead to serious mental problems.
And Matt … I wonder about him; Tim knows he is Brandon’s occasional lover but he doesn’t feel jealous, he even likes the man. This alone should tell a lot about Tim’s obsession. I wonder … if Tim will meet someone who he will love as a normal person, not as his god … and if he’s going to be jealous then.
But I guess for now Tim simply is a bit messed up teenager with his big problems he tries to deal with as best as he can … Let him grow up at his own pace. This growing up I can’t wait to watch
The chapter was fascinating ^__^ I'm already waiting impatiently for the next one. Good luck with your work and see you soon!
*hugs*
teeta
*sheepish grin* I’m glad you liked the review, I know how much I enjoy detailed reviews but to tell the truth … this was subconscious to me, and now I feel a bit … unsure if this review is going to turn alright … hehehe … And thanks for including me in your mailing list! *feels honored*
Ok, the review … yes, so Tim has no purpose in his life … as if his world stopped the moment Brandon told him to keep away. He even counts time! 96 hours! That IS obsession! And the fact that he is surprised life goes on …
Seeing Brandon makes him happy; it means he’s still far away from getting over him. Which means more suffering for him, suffering he willingly accepts, welcomes even. And he worships him, like he would a god. Scratch that, Brandon is his personal god, despite being vicious to him, and in Tim’s opinion his god can do no wrong, no matter how evil he acts.
Hmmm … and Tim’s fixation with being invisible … changed. For a moment there he thinks it’s a disaster but then he accepts the fact he is visible. I can’t predict if it’s good or bad; I would say good because how long a person can go on pretending – and believing it even – that he is invisible? This can only lead to serious mental problems.
And Matt … I wonder about him; Tim knows he is Brandon’s occasional lover but he doesn’t feel jealous, he even likes the man. This alone should tell a lot about Tim’s obsession. I wonder … if Tim will meet someone who he will love as a normal person, not as his god … and if he’s going to be jealous then.
But I guess for now Tim simply is a bit messed up teenager with his big problems he tries to deal with as best as he can … Let him grow up at his own pace. This growing up I can’t wait to watch
The chapter was fascinating ^__^ I'm already waiting impatiently for the next one. Good luck with your work and see you soon!
*hugs*
teeta
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoooohooooo finaly a new chap... please continue soon!
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!! Please update soon.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
had me laughing out loud at two different points (ch 3)....about ugly people and beautiful eyes, and the other dude's excitement over a bird. great story. brilliant humor.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah my favorite psycho is back!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Weird and cool. So original too! I love it. I can't wait for you to update. ^_^