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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this chapter yesterday, but it was late then and I was tired so I thought I'd better leave the reviewing part for today :)Interesting chapter, nice to see what's happened in the past... And that Michael, woo o_0 sick, if only Tim's mother knew!...And Batman and Robin porn, hehe, there's something very wrong with that picture, I mean, even those lines *snickers* I remember watching the old series as a child, so especially those two, not the movie version, but the..ah I am drifting off, you get what I mean?... Anyway this thing whit Michael explains why Brandon is the way that he is. And now that Michael gets out of prison... I sense trouble ahead.
Can't wait for the next update ^_^
Can't wait for the next update ^_^
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello ^__^
That was a nice surprise, to find 'Unconditional love' updated. I totally understand how RL can ruin even the best-laid plans *sighs* and I'm glad that finally I had th chance to read the next chapter.
So on to the review!
Hah, so that's th root of Tim's problems in the present, a stupid bet with three wishes, so that he can neither speak to Brandon nor be in his presence. It's amazing how well he followed those two conditions from then on. I wonder if Brandon even remembers it, the fact that they played and he won, successively making a mess out of Tim's life for so long. And I still wonder what made him hate Tim so much that later on he seemed to hate Tim so much.
As to Michael ... he played it so well, making Brandon his own ... playtoy, I think. He played with Brandon so well, and messed him just the way Brandon later messed with Tim. Maybe Brandon just repeats the same what happened to him? Once a victim, he victimizes someone else now?
I agree with Kolgrim, it will definitely be interesting to see Michael out of jail; what is he going to do? Is he going to try something with Brandon again? Or maybe will he go after Tim?
Watching Batman porn ... this scene was so hilarious and at the same time so realistic, Tim, a 12 year old, and obviously a very shielded boy, is sudden;y treated to something he was not supposed to see. And his reaction to it was so realistic and so funny at the same time. You know, you got me laughing here and clapping my hands in purest admiration! You did a fantastic job on this piece of chap. Congrats!
Um, no analysis today, I hope it's ok with you. Thanks for your review for me and ... I vote for Ryan, anyway! Dreams are ok, but there is a saying ... beware of the dreams - they may come true.
Although ... after this chapter I feel kind of sorry for Brandon ... in every previous chapter he's a bastard to Tim, and I really didn't like him. Now I understand him better and ... yup, my mind goes in different directions, though I am a firm supporter of Ryan, through and through.
OK, I think that's all for now, I really want to read on and I hope to be able to do so soon! My admiration and kudos to you!
That was a nice surprise, to find 'Unconditional love' updated. I totally understand how RL can ruin even the best-laid plans *sighs* and I'm glad that finally I had th chance to read the next chapter.
So on to the review!
Hah, so that's th root of Tim's problems in the present, a stupid bet with three wishes, so that he can neither speak to Brandon nor be in his presence. It's amazing how well he followed those two conditions from then on. I wonder if Brandon even remembers it, the fact that they played and he won, successively making a mess out of Tim's life for so long. And I still wonder what made him hate Tim so much that later on he seemed to hate Tim so much.
As to Michael ... he played it so well, making Brandon his own ... playtoy, I think. He played with Brandon so well, and messed him just the way Brandon later messed with Tim. Maybe Brandon just repeats the same what happened to him? Once a victim, he victimizes someone else now?
I agree with Kolgrim, it will definitely be interesting to see Michael out of jail; what is he going to do? Is he going to try something with Brandon again? Or maybe will he go after Tim?
Watching Batman porn ... this scene was so hilarious and at the same time so realistic, Tim, a 12 year old, and obviously a very shielded boy, is sudden;y treated to something he was not supposed to see. And his reaction to it was so realistic and so funny at the same time. You know, you got me laughing here and clapping my hands in purest admiration! You did a fantastic job on this piece of chap. Congrats!
Um, no analysis today, I hope it's ok with you. Thanks for your review for me and ... I vote for Ryan, anyway! Dreams are ok, but there is a saying ... beware of the dreams - they may come true.
Although ... after this chapter I feel kind of sorry for Brandon ... in every previous chapter he's a bastard to Tim, and I really didn't like him. Now I understand him better and ... yup, my mind goes in different directions, though I am a firm supporter of Ryan, through and through.
OK, I think that's all for now, I really want to read on and I hope to be able to do so soon! My admiration and kudos to you!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...weird...
i'm not sure even in what directio: good or bad.. but it's surely weird
i'm not sure even in what directio: good or bad.. but it's surely weird
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story! I feel bad for Timmy, though, and I hope Micheal didnt hurt lil brandon. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this has been brilliant. it captivated me from the first phrases. I loved how deep you went into the mind of your character - and hey, no text-book, cheap psychology! you avoided the clichees perfectly. I wish you'd finished this, because it surely is worth finishing. it's a fascinating story. (and the absolute best I read in this section - another highschool abused twink/jock fic and I die.)
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello yet again!
Sorry to review so late but I was kinda busy. And I sooo understand what you meant when saying you thought you’d have more time to write … with holidays for 20 days so far I didn’t manage to write much … *feels ashamed*
Anyway, on to the review. First of all … autistic? That was kind of surprising but when I analyzed Tim’s behavior, there are traits that show this. Now I don’t know if it’s true, I’m just guessing … autistic children tend to focus on some things – just like Tim focuses on Brandon, making him the axis of his life.
His approach towards his newly acquired visibility is really interesting; he doesn’t panic, instead he has this really practical approach. He works with what he can, and he doesn’t set unrealistic goals for himself. The scene with the aftershave cracked me up to no end, I was laughing madly until I was asked if everything is ok with me. The glasses scene also showed that Tim has a very practical approach.
The ‘me, me, me’ scene … Tim says he’s selfish there wanting all those things but if they were to happen, it would be Brandon who’d get more from that deal. Much more than Tim. And I can bet Brandon wouldn’t be able to appreciate it fully. Though Tim doesn’t see it like that, for him every little sliver of attention from his god is like a precious treasure. Which would only lead to Brandon turning abusive towards Tim … it would be enough for Brandon to just smile to make Tim feel better, and that’s something very dangerous.
That’s why I’m rooting for Ryan, hehe. I’m a firm member of Team Ryan *waves flags*
Ok, enough of this silliness, I have to get back to work, and seriously start typing the next chap. See you hopefully soon, and thanks for a quality reading here!
Hugs!
Sorry to review so late but I was kinda busy. And I sooo understand what you meant when saying you thought you’d have more time to write … with holidays for 20 days so far I didn’t manage to write much … *feels ashamed*
Anyway, on to the review. First of all … autistic? That was kind of surprising but when I analyzed Tim’s behavior, there are traits that show this. Now I don’t know if it’s true, I’m just guessing … autistic children tend to focus on some things – just like Tim focuses on Brandon, making him the axis of his life.
His approach towards his newly acquired visibility is really interesting; he doesn’t panic, instead he has this really practical approach. He works with what he can, and he doesn’t set unrealistic goals for himself. The scene with the aftershave cracked me up to no end, I was laughing madly until I was asked if everything is ok with me. The glasses scene also showed that Tim has a very practical approach.
The ‘me, me, me’ scene … Tim says he’s selfish there wanting all those things but if they were to happen, it would be Brandon who’d get more from that deal. Much more than Tim. And I can bet Brandon wouldn’t be able to appreciate it fully. Though Tim doesn’t see it like that, for him every little sliver of attention from his god is like a precious treasure. Which would only lead to Brandon turning abusive towards Tim … it would be enough for Brandon to just smile to make Tim feel better, and that’s something very dangerous.
That’s why I’m rooting for Ryan, hehe. I’m a firm member of Team Ryan *waves flags*
Ok, enough of this silliness, I have to get back to work, and seriously start typing the next chap. See you hopefully soon, and thanks for a quality reading here!
Hugs!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad to see such fast updates whit this story! ^__^ And Tim, it does feel more and more certain that he just doesn't see himself the way others do. Thinking himself ugly when in reality he's not... even got called sexy by the assistant after all! hihi
The world he knew is shattering into pieces and he can't go hiding anymore, people seem to notice him more and more, and Tim... is he starting to care how he looks to others? Looks that way.
But I really am not sure what you have planned and that's great! Can't wait to read and find out!
The world he knew is shattering into pieces and he can't go hiding anymore, people seem to notice him more and more, and Tim... is he starting to care how he looks to others? Looks that way.
But I really am not sure what you have planned and that's great! Can't wait to read and find out!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"For a stalker that’s pretty problematic!"- heehee. yes it is little boy, yes it is.
anyway, great update! the descriptions were wonderful. i wonder how things'll go from here. great work!
anyway, great update! the descriptions were wonderful. i wonder how things'll go from here. great work!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that last thought was pretty twisted, "laugh at me"? Most peopel would say laugh with me. tim's still keeping with the abusive thoughts. Of course being abused in such a manner by brandon might not be so bad.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the plot thickens. More good stuff, please.