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for Unconditional love

by Yblue

person Kolgrim
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, Tim amuses me, I really like him. All this inner dialogue in his head is written so brilliantly. And yay for more Ryan, sneaking his way into Tim's life, lets hope that it's a success. And this party *grins* I just hope you'll update soon, because I'm really interested to find out what happens.
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor poor boy. what are you going to do with him? no really
person janas
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww...i love tim....he's grown on me soo much...i think he's so adorable
anyway update soon!!!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha I realy like Ryan so far! I hope Tim accepts the invitation.. ^^
person SODA
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I hate Michael then lol. I hope he does go to the party, maybe it will help him...or not. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person star101
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a story like this before. I'm interested in it in a weird way and I would like to continue to read it. Please let me know when you update.
person Kyusai
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This kinda reminds me of the situation that I'm in with someone. We play "games" but I don't know if he really loves me or even likes me. Lately he's admitted that I'm always on his mind though, so step in the right direction. Sorry, that was just off track. The story is just progressing so well. Keep up the work and I await patiently an update! (^_^)
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I get the warnings now. I have to say the batman thing was sick! I couldn't stop cackling. I just have to know if that was all a figment of your imagination or there really is batman porn out there somewhere! LOL! oh one question, is this a glimpse of their past?
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
got the email thanks. this chapter does explain a few things. update soon
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I just love Tim's character. You get sucked up in his little grey and white world and can't help but see the world the way he does. In the back of my mind I am hopeing that Timmy can get with Bradon. Atleast establish a type of friendship and than gradually something more. I wish you the best of luck with this story and hope you update again soon!

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