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you are awesome! this story is awesome! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story... I have a guess where it's heading, but I won't tell ^.^

I just found that story and immidiatelly fall in love wih it ^^ I really like your Timmy, he`s so, um, practical and logical, his behaviour and thinking are so calm and calculated (of course not when pinned to the wall!), wow, he`s so real!
And I totally sympathize with him when he don`t feel like talking - it hapens to me all the time, but instead of being called autistic I get a lot of attention: What happend? / Are you alright? (obviously, only huge problem may cause my silence *rolls eyes*) / Do you want to talk about it? Grrrrr...

*wears tshirt with GO RYAN logo*

You manage to make Timmy so achingly vulnerable and sympathetic, despite the fact that from the outside he is a complete loser. I hope that eventually he can let go of his obsession with Brandon and find someone who actually will care for him. It seems like Timmy is just on the edge of an epiphany, understanding that he can't just be invisible, there are rewards for interacting with the world.

You capture so well the problem of being fundimentally not ready for a sexual relationship and all the social and emotional consequences, and yet at the same time being hormonally driven to desire sex.

This is great! I really like Ryan, he's cute. It's kind of like... when Timmy's with Ryan and his friends there's a sort of normalcy about him. That changes around Brandon, of course. Your writing is amazing and really mature. That's a huge part of why I like the story so much, I think.

You've given Tim's mother great detail and characterization. Maybe his dad needs a bit more, but I think I can sort of go along with stereotypical religious types - no offense. I think stereotypes are fun.

Anyway, great story so far. (I like Ryan loads more than Brandon, heh..)

I'll be back to read your next update!

Oh my godddddd, your such a good writer...I love your story!!!!! Any others I should know about? :P

First, I should say you are very very talented! This is incredibly well written and moving. Tim feels so real to me and I love that he's slowly coming out of his shell (even if it's not for very healthy reasons) and I just love him! What I like about this story when it comes to Brandon is though he's so perfect in Tim's eyes,we still get to see the flaws in his character...Well at least I did, though I do like him and of course Tim ending up with him or at least having some connection would be the happiest ending. But I have to say, Ryan is such a sweet guy! Him reaching out to Tim and being so patient (and maybe having a little crush but I couldn't say for sure) is just brilliant!

I feel this impending danger coming with Michael's (creep) release and I'm assuming that Brandon is now aware to what Micheal has and what he was and that the guy in chap 12 was maybe another victim seeking comfort because Micheal's out? I could be stretching though...

Really looking forward to reading more!

I was glad to see an update to this! Tim is my favorite stalker :P oooh, but I wonder what's going on?! so mysterious!What news did Brandon get? Who was the other guy? I have so many questions! *I'm starving to read more!* :)

Wow!

Great story!
(How did you find a history of my childhood?!
My diary is very much still locked in my brain!)

Needless to say I adore the POV!!

Thanks,
R

THis story is really interesting.. Tim is a bit creepy but I like him I hope he doesn't come together with Brandon somehow I don't like him!! Ryan seems a bit interested in Tim, thats his chance xD Hope you'll update soon^^