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for Unconditional love

by Yblue

schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! X*
person gosia
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. I like the difference between how Timmy thinks and how he speaks, he`d woo any guy with those witty and smart comments that only he (and we) knows, don`t you think? ^^ I can`t wait to 'see' him in his new clothes and glasses *has a thing for guys wearing glasses*
I love it, how he discovered his fondness of red color. Good idea!

Once again lovely chapter but but but where`s the porn? *laughs* Sorry Hon, but you`ve created a monster with that hot scene in the mall and now I can`t stop thinking about Tim and Ryan and how sweet their love making will be ^^

*coughs* Tim starts noticing other guys..............Ryan.................Ryan!.....................Look at him dammit!..............

Oh dear, I`m such a fangirl *fans herself*
person sum one
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's an incident really similar to this one with Michael, I hate how Tim's mom talks about it, except that when this incident happened in one of my friends neighborhood the suspect was 16 (and no cousins or stepbrothers were involved but young boys were), and that guy's mom creeps me out, saw her at this church thing once, I was like wtf??? anyway interesting story so far and yeah cousins is incest.(you're related to each other although by law the step- thing is incest also.
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As usual, you continue to amaze and impress. Tim's character gets more and more interesting and complex with each chapter, especially so after his encounter with Brandon. I love watching his thoughts unfold through each chapter. Incredible work. Keep it up!
person SODA
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really big steps for Tim! Glad he's going to that party, wonder what will happen. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person Zsadarya
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so funny. When I have read the second last chapter I've thought that the relationship between them couldn't be exactly the same. Although something did change, you could convince me that the "magic" between admirer and his hod didn't get lost.

I think your self-humorous writing style is extraordinary. It feels natural and I like it a lot. Please, keep on writing!
person Zsadarya
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
edit: I meant the admirer and his GOD, not hod; maybe even the hot god! ;)
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update PLEASE! I'm addicted to this story!
person Lokizzle
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grahhhhh!

I like Ryan more than Brandon.

D:

Brandon pisses me off.

xD
person sstt
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW That was mean (not that Timmy even realizes this) but there's no point in denying, very hot! I loved the part with Tim's attempt at socialyzing and the red scarf! It made me cringe but it was kind of adorable. Second part was both surprising yet also sort of expected of Brendon from what I've seen of his character. I have to say, not very fond of him just yet.

Please pretty please update soon!!!