rate_review Reviews

I don't know how I managed to miss your update on the chapter 13! 0_0 Anyway, I now read the two updates you had posted since my last read, and I liked the email notification! I would like to get it later too :)

Anyway, to the review! I enjoyed reading! I was just thinking of how different your characters and stories are from each other, and also... this one is different from any other I've read here. I admire your ability to create a very different sceneries and people.

I was surprised that Brandon did that! And yet, it was... fitting... Brandon seems to be the kind of guy used to have everything he wants, because he is good looking and yet... there is something darker lurking there, in his past, isn't there?

And Tim is learning more things about himself, like his favorite color, he is starting to LIVE, and maybe it means that he starts seeing things more clearly and he can let go of Brandon, but could Brandon handle the fact that he no longer has his stalker? I wonder...
Ryan is what Tim needs, and really, I can't wait for the party to start! Our little Tim is growing up :P

Great job Yblue! Can't wait for more!

AHHH HE DIDN'T STUTTER!!! LMAO

amazzing!! <33 i love this story =D

hurry wif them updates ha ha

~Eica

Briliant! Tim's making progress! This story is so original and your writing (throguh Tim) is so insightful and vivid! I can honestly say I have no idea what will happen next and I love it!

Good luck in finding a new job!

...*unfreezes self* UPDATE!!! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS BRIGHT AND BEAUTIFUL IN THE WORLD, UPDATE!!!!!! chaper 14 felt like half a chapter, honestly. it was still really good. when i'm reading unconditional love, it feels like i'm reading an actual book. ^__^

It’s fascinating that Tim’s metamorphosis is triggered by the touch of a god – his own personal god, Brandon. I’m very curious about how things will develop from here. Can’t imagine a simplistic happy end. But I hope for a positive conclusion anyway.

Chapter 14

Timmy's ecstasy is contagious!!! Even I want to own a red scarf!!!
The entire episode in the clothing store had me enthralled!!!
He handled the confrontation with Brandon's former lover well!!

Great chapter and it didn't even have Brandon.
Just Timmy...walking on air!!! Can't wait for the party!!!
Is his friend crushing on him?

Thanks,
R

This story really impressed me. Tim is so funny and endearing. His low self perception and courage nonetheless is admirable but most of all believable. I like it that you don't have them declaring "undying love for each other". You are such a talented writer. (I am still waiting for "On the outside" - it is a fantastic story)
Can't wait to read more from you.
Thank you :)

yay an update!!!

thank you!!! i can't wait for the next one

sorry to hear about your job... good luck with it...

LOL! Bring on the parrrtay! I can't wait to see Tim in his new get-up! He is going ot be looking hawt! Ryan was too cute this time. Just please don't say that Liam was the guy at Brandon's apartment. Great ch again. you got me all excited waiting for the next ch. I have this feeling that were this a book it would be one of those I don't put down until it's done.

damnit i think ive fallen for Tim....he's sooo adorable
update soon...i cant help but wish him luck for da party