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Yblue - I purposely waited so long to read this hoping that when I finished it, I wouldn't have long to wait until the epilogue. :)

First, before I get into the r&r - you're not supposed to keep tomotoes in the fridge? OR EGGS????? Won't the eggs go bad if you keep them out? I don't refrigerate ketchup or peanut butter (odd I guess...), but definitely tomatoes and eggs. lol

Ok, on to the story: What a great ending! Yes, Brandon certainly needs Tim way more than Tim needs Brandon now. What a fucked up explanation Brandon gave! He was raped continuously, but since he sometimes liked it, he felt it justified not to testify against Michael. Michael himself, is one fucked up dude. His father was some piece of work. What a monster. Brandon never attempted to actually think about this, but since he was a child, a minor, no matter how his body reacts to what is happening to it, he was still raped. He didn't want Michael and most definitely he did not want his uncle to do these things to him. Any court would side on his behalf.

I hope he can continue to confide in Tim. I really liked the ending Y - no matter how many times Brandon pushes Tim away, Tim refuses and he's always there for him. No one else cares about Brandon as much as Tim does. (Brandon's mom not included). I'm talking about other guys Brandon has had.

I look forward to the epilogue but especially Ryan's story! I cannot wait for that! You know how much I love Ryan, Y! :)

Fantastic job with this story - you should really think about publishing it, it's that good. :)

I agree with other reviewers that this is the best story I have read on AFF. I thought the end was perfect - Tim hanging in there and never giving up while obsessing about the state of the fridge.

Thank you for allowing me to be an unofficial beta for chapter 32.

So,Tim finally can make Brandon reveal his pain that he kept inside for years.I hope both Michal and his father wil rot in hell. They're both bastards. At first, I thought Tim was the weaker one, but no!he's strong, stubborn and always tries to get what he wants. And he won his prize. Brandon is with him now. I wonder what will happen to Ryan. Ah! I have to wait for the epilogue for this, right? You did a wonderful, wonderful job, Yblue. This is one of thest story I ever read on AFF. You should publish it.

This is one hell of a story. I have mixed feelings about it. I mean the dude was an asshole and I was hoping Tim would move the fuck on several times but the more I read it the more I liked it. Like seriously he wasn't worth his love or devoting for at all. So much angst and pain. but it ended on a good note now that I re read it. Again. This is the third time reading this before the hiatus and reupdate. I thought you dropped it at one point.

Love the end. We all wanted him to end with ryan, but who are we kidding he was to fucked up to be with mr perfectoon. I love the " if you must" part. Im glad you ended im an early fan just a month ago read all the chapters in 2 weeks but ur story got me. Hoping forward to read Ryans and their relationship. Good work and keep doing what you love you really good at it. Thanks for sharing ur talent and for teaching us lot of things.

Thank you for this story and thank you for Tim-his honesty with himself and others makes this such a good read even if some events are hard to read. I can't wait to see how the relationship develops and really love how he's taking care of Brandon.

The ending is a work of genious!!!! Fantastic and tenseful chapter! It was like a rubber band seeing them tense and relax with all that much emotional train wreck and the idea of forcing someone to accept help. It was so inspirational and sad!

Brandon makes all our instincts cry to help him. I'm so proud of Tim now! Adored this whole text, my dear, hope to see the epilogue later!

Omg I loved this story so much!!!! The ending was realistic and sweet I just OMG!!! And Ryan! I seriously think him and that drug dealer should maybe start something hmmmmmmm please lol

Damn, I just climbed out from under my rock and saw you posted a new chapter! And then another new chapter! lol

I think Tim may be slowly, every so slowly, but surely breaking thru Brandon's tough exterior and nasty personality. Brandon may actually like someone else calling the shots. Who knows?

I hope he stays away from Michael though. I can see Tim running over there to break one of Michael's other bones, lol.

And even though Brandon may be giving in just a little bit to Tim, I still know that Ryan will treat Tim so much better.

Ok, on to the next chapter. :)

Now, is Tim going to sit there and wait until Brandon gets home to confront him about what Michael said? I know seeing Tim still there is going to piss Brandon off.

And of course if what Michael says is true about his father and Brandon, then double ewwwwww. His father's a pedo. That's is so disgusting. He's one of the horrible men who made Brandon what he is today. What slime.

Waiting anxiously for the next chapter, Yblue. Oh no, the last one?????? It doesn't seem possible, there are so many loose ends...