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Thanks for the heads up
brilliant, painfully awkward in places but brilliant I like how you've weaved Ryan's over protective family into this it almost came to a point where I thought he was getting over brandon poor Ryan cant wait for next chap

Damnit Tim! I love him but he was so mean just now. Poor Ryan. Damn Brandon to hell. I don't care how hot he is, I blame him, and above him, I blame that... that... Micheal! Ooo, I really don't like him. Bastard. It's his fault brandon got messed up and through his messing Brandon Tim got messed up too. That is just so not cool. I feel bad for everyone in this fic. Laura was disturbing, laughing at Liam's awful joke. I like Liam though, he's a good big brother. Poor, poor, poor Ryan. Omigawsh. I can't hate anybody in this! The only bad guy is that stupid Michael. Bastard. All his fault. Grr.

OMG, that's a long review.

~Canis (patiently waiting for an update)

I do believe I have said this more than enough times but...HURRY!!! Pleeease?? I want Brandon in a chapter just as much as Tim does =) But I'll be patient and wait a week or two for Brandon and Tim's forbidden love *dreamy sigh*

Brilliant chapter! Maybe it was difficult for you but you, but the outcome was worth it! I was so glad to see Tim feeling drawn to Ryan , even though he still insists on holding on to his obsession. I enjoyed the.. ahem interaction between Tim and Ryan;) Well done! I'm liking Ryan even more and that Laura was really sweet.

Really looking forward to next chapter-I have no idea in what direction you'll take this story and it's great!

more Brandon-Tim pweeeeeaaaaase *puppy eyes*

I want to give you a John Stewart "Damn you!!!" yell. :) You had me going for awhile there thinking Ryan had a chance. I really wanted Timmy to stick with Brandon even though it's a hopeless cause. I think Ryan after this chapter does have a really sweet side that would be good for Tim. I loved the line about practicing for Brandon's sake. It made me cackle so loud! My roomie ran in to see what was going on. :) Everytime I see this has been updated I get a warm fuzzy feeling thinking I'm going to see Timmy! (And yes I am a nutter, you tease!)

Oh Tim! You silly boy! Brandon is not good for you!! *sigh* Oh well, I guess I can understand him, apparently I always fall for the "bad"guys as well and not for those who'd be willing to give up a world for me.
But always the wiser when others are concerned = Ryan is and would be good for our Tim! BETTER.

Also, I found the little smut scene quite hot, if only it had last for longer :P

But I am very interested to see if Tim will go to Brandon and what will happen if he does.

I was also liking this "horny and taking things in contol Tim" hih, It led me to wonder what Tim would desire most with Brandon? To be the top or the bottom? Somehow I think that with Brandon Tim would be willing to be anything at all, even his doormat, :P which I guess he's kind of been already.

Anyway thanks for the great and long chapter! Eagerly waiting for more ^_^

-C-

I just love it.. I am happy when i see an update..

Chapter 15:

i can't believe he broke ryan's heart like that... what does tim look like though, because i didn't get a clear picture from his description...UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! i would like to know what happens next!!!

ASOTA

Chapter 15

Awww! Tim was very brave!!! All that talking, all that drinking,
all that making-out!!! Very social!!
(Glad Liam didn't kick him in the balls!!!)

So, Tim is saving himself for Brandon and won't substitute for him!!
Poor Ryan!! He seems like he could be a real friend for Tim. (After they
get over any awkwardness between them.)

That Liam was a real live wire!! (There's a potential story waiting in the wings
there. Too bad he has a girl friend!!! HA!)

Loved the party. Timmy succeeded a little too much!!! But, he got survived!!
This ought to provide some much needed confidence!!

Thanks for the really fun chapter!! I dig all those awkward moments!!!

R