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wow! timmy got half of what he wanted. when is michael coming back?
ASOTA

i think Tim is the most interesting original character ive read...i wish Brandon would see just how kl he is

anyway love da chapter, finally had sex, too bad they didn't cuddle lol

update soon

Chapter 18

Totally devastating!!! (And HOT!!)
YEOW!!! (YAOI!!!)

What's going on with Brandon that he is so cold?!
What happened way back when?!
And has Michael gotten out of jail?

And what of poor, torn Timmy?! TIMMY!!!!!
WHAT?! WHY?! WHEN? WHERE? and HOW?!!! HA!!!

Great chapter!!!

Thanks,
R

YES!!!!!! You are beyond amazing and my heart slightly fractured when he took the picture on the phone and said he was sending it to Timmy's mom's phone.OMG

This is an Oh-my-god-chapter.
This chapter wins the OMG award of 2008.
This chapter made my day/week/month/insert random time period.
Or, in other words: I kinda liked it. Well, I am sure I will, once my brain has come back from lahlahland.
O.o
I think I have melted.

Oh, and btw: I don't want Timmy and Ryan, I want Timmy and Brandon. I don't know if I said that last time, but no matter what I thought/think is going to happen - I think the afore mentioned moral should be ignored. How about the moral that you can get anything if you really try? Or that a dirty little creep can show a bastard who's boss?
I like those morals even better. =p

Brandon's got some issues, clearly. I'm not sure I really like him, in fact I'm pretty sure I don't. I can't tell if you are going towards Timmy and Brandon being together in a semi-adjusted way, or if Timmy will wake up one day and realize his crush isn't as perfect as he's been believing all this time. I kinda hope it's the latter but it's your story. I think it's great that Timmy is using the crush to improve his social skills, but he deserves better than a jerk like brandon. Ryan, on the other hand, is pretty neat.

yay timmy got laid, by his sex god. Although I feel sorry for him because he can't stalk anymore and that was his
life.

Brandon looks so lonely, this is so sad, he had to be hugged very strongly hundred of times to make sure he understands that he is loved. Tim and him are really two very cute characters, they look incredibly real, you can almost feel their secret suffering! I love this story! (I've read it for some times now, but I think I've never let a review before - though I'm not totally certain - so let's say this is one of my top favourites)

As for Ryan, he sounds like a nice and gentle character, a cool guy with a personality of his own, and his family and friends look cool too, with all their background stories, but it's true I can't picture Tim falling in love with the boy and forget about Brandon. (And I hope he won't, because they are doing such a tragic couple together, this is beautiful! <3)

By the way, english is not my mothertongue and I'm far for bilingual either so if something sounds odd or ever mean to you (which I hope it doesn't) this is not wanted at all.

Bye and good continuation! :)

Black Sharne

The end of my review got eaten. >.>

So, I was just saying that english was not my mothertongue so if all the stuff I just wrote sounded awkward or even mean, this wasn't wanted at all.

And I was wishing a good continuation for this wonderful story!

Black Sharne

OMG!OMG OMG OMG!!!! Damn, its about time Brandon gives in lol! That was HOT! Too bad he's sooo mean to poor creepy Timmy. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!